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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really blame Hermione and Ron because Ron saw Harry drinking and didn't stop his girlfriend from following Harry in the first place besides u cant will against a drunk person and she's a smart witch she could have knocked him out and or just stund him or just left him alone and Ron shouldn't have let her out of her sight so its not really Harry's fault
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey are you going to continue this or should I just delete it from my list??
E-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com.
Please also leave your Author Name and what story you are contacting me about to save confusion.
...Ta
Aya
E-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com.
Please also leave your Author Name and what story you are contacting me about to save confusion.
...Ta
Aya
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 13! I loved this chapter! Fantastic job!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lost a prefectly good review to you for AFF.net downtime. *huffs* Anyway, I hadn't realised how close the title to my new story is to yours. *Embarrassed face-palm* I'm sorry, I was probably drunk again (drinking a lot while the in-laws are here visiting) and didn't even consider checking around at titles as I usually do before finalising them.
So, on to the story. I hope Draco takes Snape's advice even if he is a hard-headed space cadet sometimes. Ron is a piece of shit, and Hermione can kiss my lily-white butt. I hope Harry beats the hell out of him when they bump into one another on the Quidditch pitch and Ron falls and impales himself on a pitch pole. Okay, maybe not that graphic, but that's how I'm picturing it in my head.
And about the book: Have you checked out the HP Lexicon? It's like a fan fiction writer's dream. It has everything canon. There's a page that lists every canon book there is. It's been a good friend of mine for over four years. Can't wait for the next chapter, you left a cliffie!
So, on to the story. I hope Draco takes Snape's advice even if he is a hard-headed space cadet sometimes. Ron is a piece of shit, and Hermione can kiss my lily-white butt. I hope Harry beats the hell out of him when they bump into one another on the Quidditch pitch and Ron falls and impales himself on a pitch pole. Okay, maybe not that graphic, but that's how I'm picturing it in my head.
And about the book: Have you checked out the HP Lexicon? It's like a fan fiction writer's dream. It has everything canon. There's a page that lists every canon book there is. It's been a good friend of mine for over four years. Can't wait for the next chapter, you left a cliffie!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12
Nope, not to fast. I loved the whole Snape bit in the beginning. You definitely got inside his head, and portrayed it perfectly. And I liked the not-fight scene, too, between the two boys. I'm really worried about what will happen to Draco though!!
Nope, not to fast. I loved the whole Snape bit in the beginning. You definitely got inside his head, and portrayed it perfectly. And I liked the not-fight scene, too, between the two boys. I'm really worried about what will happen to Draco though!!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...again this is really an unpredictable chapter, especially the in-depth analysis of Snape's feeling and thinking, I believe we would know that particular incident later. But based on his past, that's really much like Harry, but luckily Harry has Ron and Hermione...actually after your analysis, I start thinking the reason of Snape being a spy - to repay the debt for James and Lily. Actually I have my own guess of Snape's feeling towards Lily of either like or love, but your analysis is far more convincing...as Snape is out (for a moment?), I believe things would be more difficult for Harry and Draco.
For Ron, actually in the first part, I was thunder-struck! How can Ron say something like that - choosing to be friend because of some greater evil/good! That particular wordings make me feel that Ron's being a prat at all times pretending caring Harry! But luckily again things turn out fine - yeah I totally agree that Ron always being a bighead - but he is really nice, trustful, reliable and caring. I particularly recalled Ron's joining Harry into the Forest following the spiders, or...threatening Sirius to kill him first in the shack...or using Hermione as an owl to tell Harry about the first task during book 4...in short - I like this Ron better than your suggested 2 versions...sure I believe things would turn out better when Ron and Harry walk in the common room at the same time...maybe when Dumbledore finds out later, he (together with Tonks and Remus) would come up different punishment for both of them.
Lastly, as nothing has been mentioned of Draco's, and other Gryffindors, just ask would they appear sooner or later?
For Ron, actually in the first part, I was thunder-struck! How can Ron say something like that - choosing to be friend because of some greater evil/good! That particular wordings make me feel that Ron's being a prat at all times pretending caring Harry! But luckily again things turn out fine - yeah I totally agree that Ron always being a bighead - but he is really nice, trustful, reliable and caring. I particularly recalled Ron's joining Harry into the Forest following the spiders, or...threatening Sirius to kill him first in the shack...or using Hermione as an owl to tell Harry about the first task during book 4...in short - I like this Ron better than your suggested 2 versions...sure I believe things would turn out better when Ron and Harry walk in the common room at the same time...maybe when Dumbledore finds out later, he (together with Tonks and Remus) would come up different punishment for both of them.
Lastly, as nothing has been mentioned of Draco's, and other Gryffindors, just ask would they appear sooner or later?
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
ONOES!! XDD This was a terrible place to leave off. If both Ron and Harry are going flying, they're bound to run into eachother, and I'm really worried about Draco. No it does not help that you're worried about him too! XDD
ONOES!! XDD This was a terrible place to leave off. If both Ron and Harry are going flying, they're bound to run into eachother, and I'm really worried about Draco. No it does not help that you're worried about him too! XDD
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 12! Draco went home. If he dies I'm going to be sooo angry at him for the way he left things with Harry! Now they know what Harry did. I can understand the protective streak but that other nonsense... Ron saw a lot of what went on at the Dursleys. Can't believe he'd sprout crap like that. But when you're angry the mouth takes over. He's heading outside and Harry's out there. That worries me!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no you did it again!! you left me with a cliffy...hmmp. oh and why did my draky go home...i wanted to cry lol even thoguh i know its a story, im still so scared for him. please, your the write, please dont kill him :(...oh yeah and update soon ::grins sheepisly::