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for A Ritual of Courtship

by Rumpelyssa

person auntbecky
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter as always. You've got me wondering though. In most of your stories that I've read Rudi seems to be in his 50's or 60's. Is that cannon or are you like me and the the thought of a sexy older man just makes you tingle?
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Ginny and Severus will get a surprise if their two gests want to get back at them for the matchmaking. Considering Hermione is very intelligent and Rudi is a Slithering that plan should be interesting.

Probably they will act like they can
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww that is sweet puppy love ... hmmm will their plan work ... pleasex30 update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter, I do belive I can come to love this story very much:-)))
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: I know Hermione loved Ron, but it's so sad, her crying for him every night for ten years.

Why did Mrs. Johnson know to call Hermione Mrs. Weasley when you said no one knew? I'm confused.

Question of semantics - is the British English term 'draw' for the drawers in a bureau? I've seen this a couple of times and wondered. (The American term is drawer.) I'm always curious about the differences between the two languages. At times I catch myself spelling words the British way and have to fix it. I decided long ago to just stick with my American spellings even though the story takes place in England. I wouldn't be able to do everything correctly, including idioms and different terms for the same thing (like 'ladders' in a stocking instead of a 'run') so I'm staying with what I know.


So Rudi is stinking rich? I didn't know their family had so much money.

Severus and Ginny seem so relaxed and settled and their little 'discussion' was snarky while showing their solidarity as a couple. and I never cared about the age difference with Lucius and Hermione. The age difference between Rudi and Hermione is just as unimportant to me seeing as how the magical people live so much longer than Muggles.

Hermione keeps the secret of her marriage ten years, then tells the entire magical community in one swoop? Hmmm.

But Snape as matchmaker was terrific. He seemed a natural for the job, methodical, sneaky, and he knows both people well. His little ointment trick worked. I hope he doesn't get booed for his performance with his son. Where did the name Jolyon come from?

I wonder where Hemrmione and Rudi go from here?
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am starting to love all the slithering men. I can
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it possible when I read the first Rudolpho/Hermoine story that I would like that pairing. I was wrong, absolutely wrong, I enjoy it very much and I will look forward to see more of your story, it had a great first chapter and I'll look forward for more!!!
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it now come on update soon, Please now'
person idancer
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad for both of them, but i'm hooked onto the story. Can't wait to read more. Upsate soon. :)
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I like it!

Looking forward to the next chapter,
Lexy