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Ch.3 You are doing wonderfully. I loved the part where they were discussing their misunderstanding. It made me get kind of warm and I started blushing. Maybe because I'm not comfortable with my own feelings...It is all too true that couples just don't talk enough or explain how they are feeling or how their significant other's actions may have affected them. I also just adore the thought of Snape falling in love, so yeay! Sooooo....I am really interested in seeing how this whole Bachelor auction will unfold since he is in a "relationship" now. I imagine some falling out and him going through with the auction to spite her or something, and her bidding on him and winning and making him listen to reason, or some other tart winning and she becomes waaaaayyyy jealous..blah, blah, blah...I know that what ever twist you put on this will be loads of fun! Keep it coming, and great job on updating so swiftly! I only wish I could do the same with my own fanfics. *bows head in shame*

Love it!!!!!!!

This is a wonderful story...very well-written. Will you be posting more? I tried to read it on Petulantpoetess, but couldn't get in. I do hope you will finish it here. Blessings. Elizabeth

I just read the first chapter today and was really happy to come home and find it updated!!! yea! Anyways, great chapter, i thought that it was funny that Snape forgot how to dance, lol, and i really liked how he was stuck with a boner afterwards, that was hilarious. lol cant wait to see wat happens at the auction, i think that that will be rather funny.

liking it alot. hope you have them work on the relationship more. keep up the good work. update soon please.

Just read both chapters. I barely got through the first few paragraphs before I was laughing like a loony at the image of Severus' expession in my mind as he desperately tried to get out of the auction. I love the way you had him trying to fugure out what Hermione was playing at. How dare she ignore him. LOL. I thought the dinner was brilliant. He admitting he didn't know how to dance and then kissing. I wonder if that was the first time since hi yule ball too.(Though U doubt it) Then the lemony bit at the end. Mmm.
Hey. Please hurry and post agin. I'm loving this.
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oh this is fantastic! Go Hermione with the girl power! lol
If you are looking for somewhere new to host your fic I run an archive called Granger Enchanted and we would love to see your fic there we haven't many Sev fics so I think it would do quite well. http://grangerenchanted.com (fic archives enchanted)

Mmmm, yummy make-out session. I like your incoherent Severus, his thoughts about dancing, and Hermione's self-beration. It'll be interesting to see if Hermione continues her strategy.

flipping hell! lol I literally held my breath that entire chapter *giggles* and those kisses GAH! lol well done it was excellent and I cannot wait for an update!

That has to be the best idea of getting Severus Snape's attention. Ignore him! Thats priceless!