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may not have been "the smutiest of smut" but it was damn sexy. I'm enjoying this story very much and look forward to reading more!

thats soo cute! i cant wait to see what happens at her fathers birthday dinner. im anxious to read more. update soon please!!

Love this story! Can't wait to read the meet the parents chapter. Not only for the subject matter, but also because you said you had so much fun writing it. I love that Severus explains his head over heels feelings as well as he does, and that he is OK with them. Please don't make us wait long for the next installment.

ahhh! yet another great chapter!

can't wait for the meeting of the parents-
i can immagine that will be intresting!

Great story, great chapter, I hope you will update soon!!!

I love your story! I don't think that your Severus is too soft. I really like how you get into your characters heads. You explain their feelings so well. I am so glad that their little misunderstanding at breakfast was resolved, and they could go on. I look forward to their "courting". Meeting the parents should be interesting, as should the rest of the staffs reaction. I'll be looking for your update in 2 days.

awww. what a lovely chapter! they seem so...so...so..human! lol. i dunno how else to describe it, but you really make them believable.

ok i love where this fic is going but your summary on the main page might be a little misleading to others. and then again in the first chapter, you have the main plot that relates directly to your summary. that being Dumbledore forcing Severus to be in this auction. my question to you is...where is this supposed auction? the only reference i've seen of it has been in that first chapter and the summary. in a sense i kinda wish you would go back and rewrite the story so that it follows your summary line, but the other part of me wants you to continue this story but just change the first chapter. all in all i think this story should be split in two. one with a short one-shot (maybe) of the auction and then this one where hermione and severus fall in love. umm...hope you find this helpful and i can't wait for the next chapter. until then. xoxo

I love the story. I'm a terrible reviewer, I know, but I figured I should say that much. I know I like to hear it when people like what I write.

I like it. Please update soon.