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for Draco's Fallen Angel

by dragon37

schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly loved it!!!
person Aethelthryth
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much as I would be amused to see how a Blaise/Ron would develop, Pansy seducing Hermione or vice versa never fail to entice. This story was awesome and I'm sure that whatever you decide to do with the spinoff will rock too.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The end? Oh no! I'm sooo going to miss this! Can't wait for the spin off!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was cute!!
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-6: It's a good thing Harry likes to fly on a broomstick because I don't think he'd ever get through a metal detector at the airport. This is a very different view of Harry bedecked in tattoos and piercings. It's a happy event for Harry finding out his one major fantasy cares about him too. He and Draco seem to be a good match. Both are switches.

I had to laugh when I found out Ron and Hermione and Harry were doing threesomes. That came as a surprise. But what a shame that Harry doesn't like sushi. Oh well, that's more for me.

I guess for Draco, Harry's pictorial body is a solid turn-on.

If Harry wasn't a dom before he's certainly blossomed into one quite quickly with Draco. It was almost confusing figuring out all the positions and who was putting what in who where, but I think I worked it all out. Those two are like demented rabbits on viagra. Like Harry said, they're teenage boys. (And you're asking me to believe Draco had never jacked himself off before that shower? Do I look like a pea-brained mountain troll? Don't answer that.) I like how Draco calls Harry 'Potter'. I can hear him, just like in the movies, all posh and snotty.

I can't imagine what Malfoy Senior might say if he saw the tattoo on Draco's back. I can't imagine what Malfoy Senior might say if he knew his son was Harry Potter's lover. No one worries about what Harry might do to his body, but Draco is another story altogether. I am NOT asking for that avenue to be explored in this fic, though. I'm not into bloody mayhem.

Six chapters of basically PWP. Is that a record? You managed it very well. Nice writing. It was very creative - for only having the use to two cocks. 8-)
person Annie
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. All they do is have sex. Not that I'm complaining! But damn...it's hot, too! :]
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 7 though I'm not ready for the story to end!
person misslala
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Virign charm! hahaha that was great!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I sooo need chapter 6!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too funny! Sooo need chapter 5!