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well, that was a cliffhanger! can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon. at first, I wasn't sure about your story, but the more i read, the better it's gotten. i love the plot, and can't wait to see hermione as a death eater. what will harry and ron say? will she be tempted by the dark arts?

first.....YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! A NEW CHAPTER! :) now i loved the way they were/are dressed and and i so do love the way hermione has the confendence. well now that is an intresting changelle will she do be able to do it though? i so do hope that the next chapter will be posted sooner than this one was. for i was thinking that you have forgotten us. i do hope that all is well in your life and both you and your family. :)

Very nice update soon! i like this story alot... no more cliffies!
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Anya

Even though I find Ch. 13 very abrupt without any easing from what was expected after Ch. 12, by itself Ch. 13 is rather interesting. I'm really looking forward to finding out what Hermione is going to do with her task. I wonder if Severus warned her about initiation tasks.

Hope you don't disappear again.

Great story, but sure wish you would update a lot more often. The last one was on april 12th. Please don't let your readers starve. Feed them and we will feed you great reviews. Please try and not let the last few books upset your writing. Just make it AU like the other authors. But DO update soon, I would love to see the rest of this story. As I am sure the other readers would too. Hope to see some updates real soon, keep up the great writing.

Whewww !! That Hermione does have quite the temper doesn't she ? I cannot wait to see the rest of this story. Certainly hope we won't have to wait too long ! It's been quite a few months since the last update. We, the readers, are starving for more. Please feed us ! Hope to see more updates, if not all of the rest, real soon. Keep plugging, or I should say, typing away. Don't stop and don't let the last book affect your writing muse. Just make it AU like all the rest of them are doing. It just feeds the imagination more. Please hurry !!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Interesting Story

Oh, I can't believe that elf interrupted them! lol
I really like the story, the way you used the marriage law to get them together is nice, especially around a dark fic. I like the way Hermione is so eager to learn about the dark arts, don't even want to think what the poor girl will have to go through, but I like the idea of her being a spy too. About the lemons, I think you are doing just fine on your own, but if you e-mail me (the adress is on my profile) we can talk about it some more, I'll try to help as much as I can. Well, that's all for now, looking forward for the next update, thanks for the read!

Just read several chapters. Very intriging. Guess Hermione might leave the spew thing alone now. Looking forward to reading her parents reactions.
Sansa