rate_review Reviews

So far i'm hooked! This fic is like nothing i've ever seen!The muggles actually going after wizards interesting twist..Though i am curious,is the new order just fighting for wizards or also for muggles?Please Please update soon!

wow...what a way to start my day! even with the warning of multi-chapter-plot-workings I think these two chapters are a great start. Loved the little chat at WWW's

Have some of my unpatented P.B.U.N.S. ( plot bunny ultra nutriious snacks, silent 'p') to keep them bouncing on your keyboard!

Skydancer

You should absolutely continue this! What a interesting plot! I do so love to find a totally new plot, and this is really promising. You also write very well, so I will absolutely call this a potenital great story. I look forward to follow you through the upcomming chapters!!!

Chapters 1 and 2: This is fascinating so far. The plot, the story idea, and of course, the Lucius-Hermione combo, all make me want to read chapter 3 as soon as possible. I'm a bit fuzzy on if Voldemort is ruling the world, and how the Order of the Phoenix works into the mix, but I assume those bits of info will come along with future chapters.

I'm glad you don't have Lucius and Hermione in each other's pockets yet. I'd rather have the tension of the two playing off against each other for a long time. Those two invented the words "Unrelieved Sexual Tension" and their characters are perfectly designed for UST.

Update soon, I'd love to read more.

You definitely have my attention. I am curious to see where this is headed! I'll be eagerly waiting for an update!

Shiloh