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I really like this. It has substance and from me that is a huge compliment. This story has a plot i can sink my teeth into. I think the plot wold have merit on its own, even without the HP universe. It is intriguing and exciting, and I can hardly wait for more.

MY GOD!! Poor Hermione! This story is brillaint and i cant wait for more so update ASAP!

Another great chapter!!! I hope you have some wonderful evil revenge planned for Molly and Ginny, those two deserves to learn a rather hard lesson. Please save Hermione soon, I hate seeing her in such a situation! Hopefully we will also get to know more about who is behind her kidnapping. Love your story, update soon!!!!

Up to Chapter 4 - Well, I'm ready to lead the band of readers to burn Molly at the stake! Bitch! Seems she and Ginny with their outbursts are going to alienate the rest of the Order members and drive them to the new group. Can't wait to see how this goes.

great story. can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up please!

Chapter 4: So Hermione was kidnapped by... Muggle terrorists fighting against the magic folk? I guess I have to wait to find out why Hermione is affected adversely by the use of magic, making it hurt her. And does Lucius get hurt by her pain, too? Oooh, sexy, Lucius to the rescue. How wonderful (and salacious) that he's connected to Hermione so strongly. I love where that's going so far and not too fast either. I like the slow buildup of tension for those two.

I like the Ron-Draco pairing and, for this chapter, all the transference of thoughts between wizards helped by Snape, an accomplished master of legilimency.

So far Molly is making me very angry because she never asked for any explanation, just condemned not only Hermione, but indirectly, Ron and Harry. Now I wonder why she isn't angry with the boys, thinking they're sluts, too? (A bit of double standard which I also don't honor her for...) I'm glad Ginny wasn't in this chapter - she makes me tired with her nonstop ranting. I just want to punch her out. LOL.

Well, I guess all this reaction means I like the story very much. I'll wait patiently for the next chapter and not push for it, seeing as how it's supposed to be dark (shiver). 8-)

I have just started reading your story and boy do I feel for Molly now that Lucius knows her true feelings for Hermione. My goodness! The tension that you have built between the Order and the newer group is also enticing. I cannot wait to read what will happen next. Keep up the good work!

Interesting interaction between Lucius and Hermione... I like the way they bantered back and forth. I do, however, have a hard time understanding why Ginny has turned so hateful. I trust that more will come to light as the story evolves.

SD

Chapter 3: What made Ginny so hateful? She's that mad because Hermione spends more time with Harry and Ron? Then why isn't Ginny angry with Ron too?

I like how Lucius and Hermione are bound but not exactly together. That makes for very exciting UST. And Snape is an interested observer, watching the two circle each other. I'll enjoy his comments as those two parry each other's "blows". A point system, huh? I'm not quite clear on why Lucius got a point for knowing Hermione had taken the pep potion, though. She wasn't allowed to do that?

Did Lucius feel all the blows Ginny landed on Hermione in the fight? Just like Hermione felt the pain from the Dark Mark tattoo on Lucius?

I guess there are still several characters not yet named who could be Hermione's kidnapper. So now I have to wait for chapter four. Rats!

Wow! This is a really good story. I'm curious to see where it will go. Please update soon.