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Brillaint please let it continue this story is great having former DEs and ootp team up

I thought it was Molly not Bill's wife oh well I hope they find it soon and the war is over and Lucius's wife is killed and so is Molly

This is by far one of the best AU fic I have read. An outstanding premise and intriguing plot twists. I only just discovered this and am dismayed to see that it has not been updated since 2007. I do hope that it is not a permanent abandonment, as this fic deserves further development and completion! Please come back and finish it! Still, wonderful job.

I love your fic, please update as soon as possible. I

From one author to another, EXCELLANT job! Keep up the great work!

Ch. 10 - Well yes, that was a surprise as to who the new death eater was. Hmm. Well then. And can we at least get a promise for a rematch later, to enjoy the well-deserved, and now delayed, ass kicking? :)

yeah a new chapter! the fight scene was just fine no worries! espicaly sense you have never written one. i will confess that i did think it was molly that was the new death eater. you really have to love that hermione is such a genius with spells. :) poor tonks how will remus handle this terrible turn of events? i do wonder what will happen with lucius and hermione will they ever decover their true feelings or even exnolge the feelings that they have as what they are? even just a little? mostly i am asking because as much fun as it is to watch them battle one another it would be so much better if it were of a sexual nature. ;) i do hope that the next chapter is soon in coming!

this is a brilliant story hope you update soon

Chapter 10: Don't worry, your martial arts fight was very good, very realistic. I took Kenpo karate for several years and had worked up to starting a brown belt when I quit, so I know whereof I speak. I liked the entire chapter, starting with Lucius' very odd behavior - he sounded like he hated Hermione, but that can't be so I STILL don't know what's going on with him. I'll possess myself in patience I guess. Then the exciting fight was breathtaking - so visible I could see the blows and the rolling, jumping moves and feel the hits.

Having Voldemort powerful enough to actually summon his Death Eaters without their cooperation is scary. (Puts hand up) yes, I thought the new recruit would be Molly. I think she would have looked quite good in boils. But how did Fleur get turned? And poor Tonks - will she get rescued? I hope her capture doesn't make Lupin do anything stupid, but it will be hard for him to do nothing. How will Voldie let Lupin know Tonks is in the Dark Lord's power? I don't think any of the Eredita double agents who witnessed Tonks' capture in the forest will tell Lupin, or he'd ride off to the rescue, putting the group in jeopardy.

Wonderful chapter and a suspenseful entry. Now I'll have to wait for the next episode. I hope, hope, hope Lucius turns out to be playing some hidden game and he's really fond of Hermione. For all her anger, she seems drawn to him. I think I have a ways to go before the story winds up with Lucius and Hermione as a couple. I love the 'will he, won't he - does he, doesn't he' and the same for Hermione. I hope we get chapters and chapters of their tense, strained, HOT relationship before they come together. (Although a bit of recreational or reluctant groping would be icing on the plot.) Great work!!

I think that you are doing a spendid job with this tale and Hermione's rage. I know that the rift between her and Lucius will not easy to mend, but I think that their strong feelings are due to the nature of their relationship. You would have had to love someone desperately to hate them so much now. I cannot wait to read more ... I even tracked your story down to ff.net just to read onward. Keep up the great work and please update soon.