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November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Um...interesting premise, but I can't get past the grammatical errors and punctuation.
schedule
May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your stories, but it is rather hard to have them make sense, only because the punctuation marks are in the wrong places and many words are mis-spelt. No offence. Your story is great.
Try re-reading it once you have finished and fix up any punctuation etc.
Well done! I'll be waiting for the next chapter if you write it.
Try re-reading it once you have finished and fix up any punctuation etc.
Well done! I'll be waiting for the next chapter if you write it.
schedule
March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ poor remus ... hehe rita is gone ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor remus .. please say remus is not going to make parvati his mate ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm wont remus be shock when he find out what really happen .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice start ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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