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I like this story write more=)

OMG!

U cant stop there its just too cruel!! please update this!

I adore Benadict, she's not all weak and pathetic, which makes a nice change

expectantly awaiting more ^ ^

I love what you've shared with us so far, but your story strongly reminds me of another one I absolutely fell in love with some years ago. It was called "Leda", and the author was someone called Corri Anders (?), if I remember right. No offense to your ideas, though... I hope you'll update soon cuz it's a great idea.
Poor Lucius - you'll have him a nervous breakdown in one of the next chapters, I'm afraid (well, I'm not really afraid as Lucius deserves that!). *lol*

Chapters 1-3: This is a fascinating premise. She is Nemesis, like the Greek goddess? I can't tell yet if Lucius Malfoy is totally bad or caught between a rock and a hard place. Since this is the Lucius/OFC section, I'll assume at least that Lucius winds up with Benedict, ergo maybe he has some redeeming qualities. I wonder what the Dark Lord wants her for?

I hope that wherever the storyline roams, Benedict finally is freed from her unfortunate effect on others. Or Lucius is going to have quite an adventurous (probably short) life. 8-)