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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggle*!!!!! oh my but that was juicy! yum yum.
yeah yeah.. not a very constructive or useful review... but and encouraging one noe the less!!!
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...wow...that was hot. So many questions, but why ruin the feeling? Wow!
person lbrado
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed this. I hope that you'll consider turning it from a one shot into a few different encounters, because I'd very much enjoy reading them.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!! I LOVED IT!
person brayzen
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great...you should continue this fic....it has super potential!!! Im really curious if he will totally remember everything, and whether or not this will change what just happened between them.
~btw...earlier in the fic hermione said her name was jane...but then at the end he said hermione....was that a slight rememberance coming back to him, and why didn't she react to it? sorry i don't mean to disect your story but my mind is a little frazzled as it has been overcome with 'what ifs'.....lol...again this fic is Fabulous!!!!
person Rosamund
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kept getting distracted this morning, but DAMN!!! That was hot! Can't wait for more...please continue soon!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my dear! that was awesome! and very interesting. PLEASE continue this...dont make it just a one shot.