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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

person kazfeist
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a coincidence! I come back and find that you've just updated! Please email me when you do so again! Your storyline is intriguing and novel. And the stage experience doesn't hurt, either, I'm sure! :D My email is: kazfeist@gmail.com. If you put "Dramione story" in the subject, I'll know not to delete you. Thanks, and looking forward to the next installment....and wondering how you're going to get Draco exhonerated of the crimes committed....though he WAS underage and coerced at the time they were committed, if I remember correctly. ;)
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I love this. Seeing Draco in a totally different light makes for an amusing read. The interaction between Hermione and Draco is exquisite. I hope to see another chapter.
person Rosamund
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...nice update! Hasn't it been long enough? ;) I like where this is going...great job!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi. I just wanna say I like this story for some reason and like some of the other reviewers are saying, you really have a plot going...one that could take over the smut...you don't even need the smut in my opinion...i think i skipped half of it and just focused on the plot. It's different to see Draco in the position that he is in and can definitely be used to your advantage for a very interesting and sad story. Well, not necessarily sad, but the idea of Hermione interacting with an enemy in such a civil way without him knowing that he was mean to this 'beautiful person who appears in his dreams', grabs my emotional attention. Hope this makes sense. :-)
person Kilalla
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so mysterious lol

love it
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad this isn't a one shot. You've got an intriguing set up, and it's unfolding nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, what a conundrum. If she gets attached to Draco, she can't ever bring him back to the wizarding world. Although Amnesiac!Draco does seem to be an improvement . . .
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow I loved the first chapter - so hot. Draco would be great as a stripper! I look forward to the rest of the story.
person kazfeist
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good beginning to a story. One doesn't see many memory-charmed!Draco stories out there. You've given a good backstory with the vengeance motif. It could be expanded nicely. It might also be good to expand on whether this is a post-war or during-war story. :D
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Complete? :-( Pretty please can we have a sequel or another chapter? That was so hot and Draco is so adrift. Plus it's fun to see Ginny frown at Hermione.