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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I promise I've been with you from the beginning but have stupidly not reviewed, just want you to know that I think this story is excellent and has such a unique storyline, it's amazing!!
person Rosamund
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated again! Please keep the chapters coming! Ha-ha! Love this story...like Ron being kinda lame here and Draco/Damien being so forward with her and somehow calling her Hermione (did something like that happen before? I need to reread!!!). Fantastic chapter!!!
person ichiruki
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm so happy you updated. I really like this story and it just seems to be picking up more steam! Yay!
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg he said her name and so stuns him my god!
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter!!!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you would continue this story. It's just so intriguing. Please, please finish it! I wanna know what happens next!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is an awesome story thus far! Any plans on finishing it? I personally am practically dying to know what happens next!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Keep wiriting! This is a great story! I need more! I'm sure you will think of some fluff to write until the end! Don't give up!
person kazfeist
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Penny, thanks for the email! This was pretty good, for a transitional chapter. I'm still curious to find out how Draco got to the Muggle world, and what's going to happen when he finally gets back to the wizarding world. :D
person ichiruki
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FWIW, I really like this chapter, esp the bit with the "civic war" reenactment lol! That was hilarious, I could totally picture people doing that. And nice hotness with the dancing. I really enjoy your story, so all the hard work to putting a chapter together is much appreciated!

It would be a little bittersweet if it was short since there seems to be so much here, even if you don't think so, but if well written I could totally dig it being on the short side. As far as material goes, I mean there's the wedding for Ginny and Harry, Ron is in the mix a bit isn't he?-surely he's got to move on too or not, then Draco with the memory loss and then Hermione's job, which for a moment there I thought Dung's case was going to delve into something more, like Draco being forced to get his memories back to help with something, and the possible fall out of that if that happened and he remembered Hermione's influence/presence leading up to the whole "oh, snap I got my memories back!" moment but since it was that reenactment group it makes me wonder what the hell would happen if he got caught up one night in the mess by accident lol...of course I'm just listing all this because I see lots of chapters worth of potential, which I understand when one is writing instead of just along for the ride like the reader, it gets hard to see where to go next lol.

:)