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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

person Anon
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, the plot thickens. I was so sure it had been Narcissa that left Draco there without his true memories and I also thought it had been done to protect him but now I'm not so sure..... Luna's not exactly known for keeping a secret so I can't help but wonder what's going to happen if Ron finds out. He certainly won't be treading carefully around Draco. WOnderful stuff once again!!!!! I can't wait for more.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love your story! I've recently joined your yahoo group as well and I think I may have improperly responded to an email rather than go on the discussion forum to post my theory on what happens. I think a good twist would be if it turns out that Hermione had been the one who charmed herself and Draco (or they erased one another's memories at the same time) possibly to protect them both from something that the Order and Voldemort would have found "interesting." What specifically could be "interesting" enough for both groups to go after them I haven't a clue. Maybe they were romantic before the whole memory loss episode and didn't want to put one another in danger. But then that leaves Dearborn, which definitely needs to be considered.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The tension is nearly unbearable! When will he remember and when he does - what will trigger it? Arrgh! *headdesk* Please keep your muse happy - anything I can help with ? :)

Very nice chapter. I like how Draco can sense the magic and how he remembered Hermione in Potions class. LOL for Luna to be completely unfazed by Hermione
person ichiruki
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I was so entranced! And now I barely stand myself, such is the anticipation! ;)
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am a rabid fan of this story. Please update soon!
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOt hot hot! :) Lovely. I cannot wait to read more.
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey, I don't care if you wrote that chapter ten times...that was fuckin hot! That is all I have to say....makes me want to hit up a strip club lol
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pennilyn... that...was....freakin....*hawt*....and....delicious!!!! Can't wait to see the next offering!!! Awesome chapter!!!!!!!
person mlui
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say I absolutely love this story so far! I'm sure she wouldn't lose her job if found out...maybe, there'd be an inquiry and a possibility that she would lose her job...I'm sure Draco would be devastated that Hermione knew all along his past identity and didn't tell him. Then again, if she explained why, I'm sure he'd understand. Hmm...I'm getting ahead of myself with all my musing of what's going to happen. LOL. What I meant to say is that this chapter is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you'll update again soon!! =) 10/10
person SeayKat
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for a while now and I am really enjoying it. I had to laugh at your author's note because I actually said OUT LOUD while reading your story, How much research did this girl do for this story?! Your description of Draco's stripping was VERY detailed and now I can't get that image out of my head. Thanks!