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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..it's getting complicated anyway closer to know who's that woman abandoned Draco at stripper club! i hope may be next chap he will remember something...i don't blame you if you were obsessed into Twilight world til almost forget to update this :P i know some authors here did! even though i'm eager to read more but it's okay....plz update soon!
person sjauthor
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I got sucked into the Twilight world as well and I can understand! Thanks for the update though, it was brilliant and I can't wait what happens next!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so amazing! I mean you have really created a work of art! Dung screaming at Draco, that smarmy, creepy Louis, the woman who modified his memories, this is just genius, and I'm drawn in, each and every time! Thank you SO much for sharing!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad we didn't lose you to the world of Twilight!! That was a fabulous chapter, and I feel as though we are getting close to the climax.... Can't wait to see what you put up next.
person Rosamund
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can finally review! As I told you in the group e-mail, awesome, awesome work! Love how she brought Draco home to her lair and hope Ron gets a wake up call that he messed up and will NEVER get her back. Now, I tried to vote but had problems with yahoo...I hope Minerva or Hermione herself is the one who took Draco into his new life. I would love a blood connection between Minerva and Draco (secretly Narcissa's mother? aunt?). You rock!!! Oh, and I also hope Ron couldn't get down to any deeeds with...blech!!!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes this is so great and i really think its luna that left him there
person kazfeist
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Penny, this was great....I think it was one of the Creeveys. Or maybe one of the Smiths. They weren't as honorable as the rest of the Order. :D
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I like how you raise the suspense in this. Feels like its getting close to the climax..... pun intended ;)
person mlui
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was VERY awkward conversation to have with her mum and to be spotted too. So maybe not Narcissa...it might be Snape? He has long hair and since no one remembers, the memory of a man can be distorted to become a woman? Snape's a half-blood and so he knows of Muggle life... anyways, awesome chapter! I was disappointed when he didn't catch anything magical by accident (like Luna's head in the Floo). LOL. Please update again soon! =)