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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just wow.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the battle scene, Penny! As for what happened, the fact that there were only five Horcruxes caught my eye. No mention of Nagini or Harry himself. Also, the fact that Hermione killed and used Crucio. The grave....maybe it was Narcissa, already dead? And Bellatrix is being her with Polyjuice, which could make HER the one who put Draco in the Muggle world..... :D Keep it up, I'm on the edge of my seat. :D
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, didn't see the school award Horcrux there. So, there are still only six, though. ???
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Was the school award the important thing to watch out for?? I caught that right away. I really enjoyed how Hermione cast two Unforgivables. I loved how you captured how it would feel to cast one. I felt bad for the girls at the end of the LARP(Live action role play). Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY Gawd!!! That was absolutely amazing (for want of a better word to describe how I'm feeling right now). I swear, I was right there in the middle of that battle, ghosting Hermione's every move, seeing what she saw, feeling what she felt. You made me feel a part of it and that, to me, is the most positive sign of a truly exceptional writer. I only wish I was half as good. Well done, dear writer, well done!!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I admire every word of this story and absolutely cannot wait for another update. It's getting me through uni. What an amazing job! Thank you so much for the time and effort you spend on this! Update soon?
Tam
Tam
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really wish she would tell him though...the longer she waits, the harder it's going to be for both of them to overcome this.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A chapter as good as that is worth waiting a month for. I liked the talk Hermione and Tom had. It was very insightful. I'm really looking forward to future chapters.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I find the pressure Hermione is under to be so real that I can almost feel it. The way you write Draco and her together along with her guilt and his confussion are tragicly beautiful. I can't help but fell something horrible is about to happen. Can't wait for more they way you write this story had really gotten under my skin. Well done!!!