rate_review Reviews

Wow! I do love your story. Im so intrigued Lol. I'm a very picky reader and I dont really review much, even though i should, i know what its like wanting peoples feedback. But what you've written is so fantastic that I just had to review. The characterisation of both Hermione and Damien/Draco is very good. I feel so sorry for Hermione, I want her to tell him, but I know that in doing so she might lose the little piece of happiness that she has. For some reason I have this idea in my head that someone will beat her in telling him who he is. Like his identity will be found out and then be arrested by the MLE before she can do anything about it. It would just make the situation even harder to explain for her. Lol thats so mean (Sorry I'm on a sugar high and I've had little sleep). You can tell by the way you have written it that you've really thought about each aspect of the plot and how you intend for the story to play out. I like how Draco even though he doesnt know who he is, has parts of his core being leaching through Damien. Like his believe that he is magical. I cant remember exactly when I thought it, but I have this sneaking suspicion that the person behind Dracos loss of memory is Hermione herself. Although she hasnt finished her investigation, it just seems that from what you have written the only two powerful enough to create a memory charm that strong is a)Snape and b)Hermione. Something tells me that it isn't Snape. The only thing that doesn't make sense about that would be placing a memory charm on herself, but time will tell. I'm probably completely wrong but I thought i might put my two cents in Lol. I'm really looking forward to where you take the story, I'm hoping that in the end they will still be together and are excepted by Harry and Ron, whether they have a spat when he finds out and dont talk for awhile, or they have a spat then have really good make-up sex (Lol, Hermione would definately enjoy that) I am looking forward to whatever you come up with.

Anxiously waiting
Nym :)

Penny, you're getting us closer and closer to the mystery's solution. I like that you've sort of been able to keep it in canon. Can't wait for the rest. :D

even though i read APOF since sth like 10th chapter, this is my first time reviewing...shame, i know...well, i just wan to tell, that i really REALLY love this story...it;s one of the best slashfics i ever read (and boy, did i read many...). well, i am very much looking forward to how does this turn out...and i;m (equally much) hoping for happy ending...or happy enough to let them stay together (after all maybe)...i say, let them have a row, let Draco be angry (as he has right to be)...but let them make up at the end...pleeease. i dont think i really care anymore about whether they find out who was it that brought him to the club....just let them be together...:)

oh and i forgot to say so the first time...but i think it was Tonks who hid him..that theory makes most sense to me at least...andromeda hadnt had to know...and tonks might have hid him elsewhere....OR andromeda might be skilled enough occlumen to hide lying from hermione...

Oh dear, I want her to tell him, really I do and yet I want her happiness to last (which it can't this way, I know). Waiting anxiously to see what will happen next.

Ha! I beat your post...now on to read :)

Awesome, awesome, awesome...was Andromeda the one? Oh, I have so many more questions but must travel to the Bay Area tonight :) Thank you for posting!!! I need to reread later tonight...had to "rush" through in my excitement and trying to get ready. Thank goodness I'm packed!!!

glad we're finally getting to the meat of the plot!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

The whole Tonks and Andromeda and grave thing is fascinating. Poor bewildered Draco. He's so sweet and Hermione's so in love.

btw, that was such a sweet, sweet sex scene. My heart practically melted.

That line about the lightning on his face niggling the edge of her memory was such a tease though . . .