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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

person nmos
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great.
i can totally see the memories telling hermionie that she was the one who obliviated draco.
maybe they even liked eachother before she obliviated him? or maybe not at all. i don't know really.
i'm dying to see what happens.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! we're getting somewhere! Answers, soon, maybe?!? Ahhh! What a wonderful gift right after taking a brutal final!! --Keep up the good work!!
person mosaic
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my gods, are you trying to kill us? and how does dearborn recognize her? wasn't he obliviated too? ah, the suspense. i want a happily ever after for them, its so heartbreaking right now.
person elladee
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a rollercoaster!
I totally understand where Hermione is coming from, but at the same time... I can't wait for everything to finally come out into the open! Looking forward to the next chapter and some progress as far as Draco's memories are concerned!! Thanks for this engaging story~~ :D
person kazfeist
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Penny, you are such a tease! Can't wait for more! And, how interesting that Dearborn remembered her...he never was part of the new Order when Hermione was in it, was he? I thought he'd only been part of 'the old crowd'. :D
person Rosamund
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant...and I am now more sure that Hermione was involved and had HER memory adjusted. ;) can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!!!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, I was so sure he was going to remember this time. And what about Dearborn? Is that really a coincedence that Draco started to remember something after Hermione left them alone? I'm getting a little annoyed with Hermione - she had her chance to tell him the truth and she didn't go through with it. I know why she didn't but this is just going to make things so much worse. And I suppose I'm clued in too late to the fact that it might well have been Hermione who obliterated him, hid him and then wiped her own memories. If that's the case, kudos to you for such an amazing plot bunny. :)
person classsic
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to bang myself against the wall. Ergh. That was really frustrating - but in a good way of course. You will never disappoint me... but the story. Oh my god. I just want it to happen already. haha.

Poor Draco though! I can't believe he thinks he's going crazy. :( He doesn't have a plausible explaination for what's happening to him and I feel so bad. Hermione was SO CLOSE. ERGGGGH! Please please update soon. I need to know what happens next. :(

My favorite line:
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please forgive my rant, but I am feeling very "Draco"ish at the moment...

Her cowardice and self-preservation is just pissing me off! How can she keep doing this to him? She supposedly loves him so much, but she will let him keep suffering and thinking he's losing his mind. She had the chance to tell him when he showed her the book. And, she's had hundreds since. Hell, even Ginny is trying to be helpful and supportive of a relationship she doesn't approve of, but Hermione is too selfish to see anything but her own needs and wants. ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, back to the normal HG4eva...nope, still to ticked with her. Sorry. I want them together. I want him to ultimately forgive her. And, for a long time I understood her thoughts and reasonings. But, now she's just being cruel. And, telling him when he's not coherent doesn't get her out of it, since she immediately made up a story about him being robbed instead of sitting him down and telling him the truth again.

What is a sign of good writing? When a reader is actually so angry with one of your characters that she wants to enter the story to smack some intelligence into said character. You are that good.

Thank you. I look forward to the next update.
(the I promise I am not crazy) HG4eva
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wicked chapter!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!