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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well good gracious! First, you shocked me (good on you for that one!!!) with her actually telling him the truth and then it not working. That was a fantastic twist. I was with Hermione in that I was so busy yelling at her to just tell him that it never once dawned on me that it wouldn't work. lol Then, the box of memories...boy did you stop at the wrong place! :-) Bad writer. I need more...

Thanks hon,
HG4eva
person elladee
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great development!! I was a bit disappointed when it became apparent that Hermione couldn't trigger Draco's memories afterall... so it was perfect to follow up with the discovery that some of her own memories have been removed as well! I can't wait to find out what those memories contain~ And Dearborn!! I knew he had to know something! haha

Thanks for a great chapter. :D
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so now, the craziness insues. *Great* chapter PN!!!! Man, fabulously awesome chapter. So can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Rosamund
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! Well, I knew the vault meant something of memories, and Hermione clearly has had her own memory tampered with (She did it! Maybe...). Oh, this is brilliant and both frustrating! More soon!!! X-mas? Ha-ha!
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I ever reviewed this story before...but after I've been reading for so long now...even signed up at your yahoo! group too, I think I have an idea about who oblivated Draco...and that's the unexpected person, really! Anyway, I will keep my guess with me until you reveal it so I won't spoil anyone's guessing!

About this chap, I must say there's a bit too many details to read (for me only)but it's still good because another patient readers can imagine along with it. The story is going and turning in unexpected way ...and almost I'm almost taken aback (just almost since I still don't know who) by your style and I like that.

please keep updating!
person linkar
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been following your story for a while, and I must say it's incredible! The last chapter is such a thrill - I can't wait to read what happens next. It seems that Hermione, like Draco/Damien, is in for a huge revelation. I'm almost certain who obliviated Draco (I won't give it away now), but I am not so certain about who obliviated Hermione. My other guess is that both of the Obliviations took place at about the same time, maybe one right after the other, both Draco and Hermione being present together...

Your story is so rich with intrigue and details, it makes it a delight to read - so many surprises and twists coming up! Very deep and sophisticated. :)
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I had a sinking feeling that it was Hermione herself who had taken Draco to the strip club. How is she going to explain that to him on top of everything else??

Brilliant chapter, great story!
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely unbelievable amazing chapter hun! I actually held my breath when she confessed to Draco! Love the way things are going! keep up the awesome work!!
person SeayKat
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I may be completely wrong, but this came to me in a sudden burst of light so I had to write it down. Hermione and Draco were involved somehow before the war- romantic, spy-related, I dunno- anyway, HERMIONE IS THE ONE WHO DID THIS TO DRACO!!! I KNOW IT!!!!
person Rosamund
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Luna...I've been wondering that myself for months :) On the livejournal I expressed this again today...especially since Ron would get a blow from it...Hermione's heart always belonged to Draco! Ha-ha! If not Hermione, I was also hoping for a connection to Draco with Minerva, and that she is the one who did it. Oh, I hope one of those vials contains her own memories. They could remember together and he would kiss her as Draco...oh, the thoughts linger and fester to my own madness! ;)