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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

person amsev
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful on so many levels: the mystery of how Draco was deprived of his memories, incredibly SEXY Damien, the stripper (got my blood boiling!), Hermione's own travails, and the amazing, erotic loving between Hermione and Damien/Draco. I was directed to this story by a Live Journal friend and read it thus far in one sitting. I couldn't stop reading and am very much looking forward to more! (Evil cliffie there at the end of The Vault!!!!)
person tanza
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I'm completely in love with this fic! Please say your planning to update?
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bah!!!, where is this yahoo group!!! I'm wanting to hear all the secrets to this delish story I have just sat and read for the past two hours!! Bravo, I'm thoroughly pulled in and anxiously waiting to find out who has altered her memory, and what happens to Draco!! Definitely bookmarking this story!! Wonderful.
person kazfeist
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, damn! She did it herself, to protect him! :D
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And yet another permutation...

Could Hermione actually be the person she is looking for? I won't theorize much because I look forward to whatever twist you have in store.

It was heartbreaking how Draco thought he was losing his mind, yet couldn't break through when Hermione confessed to him. You do a really wonderful job at making the reader feel both Draco's shame and doubt and Hermione's heartbroken panic. This story gets better and better with each chapter. I am definitely along for the rest of the ride, bumpy though it may be. :)
person MegNutz
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey just wanted to say that I'm Sooooo in luv with your story. its one of the best draco/hermione ones that I have really liked in a long time. keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update!!!!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I finally broke down to review im an awful reader!!. your story is so amazing!! I seriously do my happy dance whenever i see a new chapter! I look forward to the next ones and you are so mean for leaving such a cliffy! but again i love it! tell me if you need more good reviews to keep writing cause I will so fufill that wish!!!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow so please forgive my horrible spelling mistakes that i just noticed and i totally agree with broken but alive she sooooo did it!!!
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. You are so brilliant.
I love it!
I've thought that it was Hermione who used the memory charms.
It's been a theory of mine for a while now. :)
I think that she obliviated Draco and herself.
Awesome cliffy.
Can't wait for more.
Also, I think that maybe, Draco and Hermione already had a relationship before they're memories were taken.
Well, enough blabbing from me. :)
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg not fair not fair... what a cliffy are they dracos or hermiones?? only time will tell... shesh i dont think ive ever been this excited about the ending of a story... i am dying to know how it ends!!!