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This and indeed the first chapters are my favourites, the first because it was so damn hot and raunchy and this one because it showed me just how amazing Hermione really is and I truly hope, when Damien is Draco again he realises what she did for him and what it cost her to do it. The story of how it all came to be was perfectly executed. Brilliant job!! :)

I really enjoy this story. You have a real knack for mystery writing. I was following this story on Colored Grey, but the site seems to have gone away. Hope you can update soon.

We finally know!!! Awesome chapter PN!!

Wow. I never would've guessed that Hermione would be the person to do all of this. It's so shocking. I have to say that I had to keep stopping myself from reading in one go for fear that I would start bawling. Poor Draco! I can't believe that Hermione had to get a job for him there as her last resort. I have to say that this was very clever of her... Great plan... even she didn't suspect herself. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I want to know what Hermione thinks of all the memories she just uncovered. Great chapter as always. :D

I had a feeling it was her.
With her job at the Ministry.
Glad to know that Dearborn was taking care of young malfoy.
waiting for more.
next chapter will she tell him dearborn or malfoy

That was quite the way to celebrate numero dos anniversay! I adored it! Reading it from Hermione's perspective was even more than I could ask for, so happy that it turned out that way. And the interactions with Dearborn were incredible and somewhat a surprise, although we knew he would figure in somehow. Absolutely fabulous chapter! But now...what will she do next?

Thank you so much for posting during this exhaustive week of academic writing!

Oh, and loved Draco smelling her and such. I still don't think he hated her...there must have been some feelings locked away, especially for him to trust her and not anyone else from the Order or Harry world

~Avanell

For my own pleasure of the latest chapter, just had to go reread "Jane" meeting Dearborn and then Malfoy's recollection of what he said about her. Oh, it just fit even more so :) Brilliant tie in to what happened back then. LOVED IT!!!

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I only just got around to reviewing the last few chapters!!
Loved them, this story keeps getting better!
Cant wait for more!

Casey
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Love it! Love it! Love it! I think I know where you are going with this but I won't say anything - don't want to spoil it for anyone else. Keep up the good writing. I love how you are writing draco's character, I actually feel bad for him - poor baby!!