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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must be a dummy, I didn't see this one coming! You have a real knack for mysteries and an excellant writing style. I really love this story and can't wait to see how you wrap it up. I know you posted on the "colored Grey" site (I had you saved as a favorite). Do you know what happen to it or if it is back up? There are a coupole of stories on that site I really loved and now I can't find it.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story! I hope you do write more. It has me hooked and I have to admit that I was shocked that it was Hermione who obliviated Draco and made him who he is. Again please please please write more of this AMAZING story! :D
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well...well! Dayum! That was deep, touching, beautifully written, and even though most of it could be deduced, still surprising. The intensity was perfect and her own personal horror complete. A+++++ Wow! Thank you for a job REALLY well done. HG4eva
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just as I expected, about 2 chapters back. Wonderfully done though! Nice twist to the story. I'm anxiously waiting to see how they bring him back, how he and Hermoine turn out, if it's bittersweet or not, and if he has to go to prison.
person mlui
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't say "I knew it" per se, but I was really hoping for it not to be Hermione. Really. I just know she'll beat herself up and, well, I hope their relationship will still stand afterwards (if she releases his memory). But didn't she try to reverse the memory charm before and it didn't work? I'm glad Hermione (and we, as readers) know and great chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update! =)
person elladee
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this explanation chapter!!! Now I'm so much more anxious to find out how Draco is going to react once the memory charm is reversed (since Hermione can reverse it, correct?)... I'm so afraid that the person he's become will disappear, and he'll revert back to the old Draco and absolutely loathe Hermione for hiding him amongst Muggles. Especially since she left him there for so long! Draco is like the kid whose parent forgot to pick him up after school... times 1000. haha

I hope the next chapter will be posted soon~!!
person nmos
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent update!
seriously.
good job.
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie!!! And I was right. Very good. I'm very anxious to see what happens next. I like how you made Draco so vunerable but also keeping his typical 'Malfoy' qualities as well.
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! now she can reverse the charm herself!!
Great Chapter!!
Hope to see an update soon!!

xoxo
person kazfeist
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup, you're right! But the previous chapter gave the biggest hint. I can understand now why you wrote before about Hermione's dread of him finding out the truth. Three years! Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D