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You had trouble with this chapter? It was AMAZING. Especially that line "though around them, bodies undulated and the world went on." So beautiful and wistful.
I can't wait to get the next chapter!!

you are not 100% sold on it?... well....I definitely am...I absolutely loved this chapter, maybe more than any other previous one... I wept while reading it. really. it was so beautiful and sweet but painfull and bitter at the same time... like, e.g., Scarlett and Rhett on Charleston beach after almost drowning... I am preying for happy end.... let Draco be angry, but let him also realize that just night before viewing the memories he claimed to love her and looked like he ment it seriously... and Hermione should also get something nice, especially as she deems herself undeserving of love...(please, have mercy...with us and them both...)

Fabulous chapter. I'm so relieved to hear that you've got most of the next part written because I might expire from sheer impatience if I have to wait too long. (Although, still, please take your time and make sure you are happy with it before you post.) I know what my preference for the ending would be, with Draco initially devastated but eventually forgiving Hermione. In other words, yes, happy, but not instant all-is-forgiven fluff. Instead, a realistic working through of the issues that need to be worked through (including his legal status). Whatever you do I'm sure will be well worth reading.

NNNNO!
YOU CAN'T MAKE THIS A SAD ENDING
I love them too much!

WONDERFUL story! I love how extensive your vocabulary is too. The descriptions and explanations are very well written! I can't wait to read the ending (and I'll vote for the happy ending while I'm here :D)

I think you should be sold on that last chapter because it was great. I love reading your updates. My heart was aching for them the entire time; they've grown on me so much. I can't wait to see what comes of Hermione's confession. I can't wait for the next chapter!

As for the ending. I've always been a sucker for a happy one. Draco deserves to find true love, especially after all he's been through. I don't think I could stand them not ending up together.

Woow wonderful chapter once again! I've been hooked to your story when you just started it and I found it back a few weeks ago. It's brilliant,. your writing style., foreshadowing., perfect! The only thing I have to say is: HAPPY ENDING PLX...couldn't bear if this was a sad or unhappy ending., Please please please make it end happy., can't wait for the next update dearie!!

This chapter was so sad and bittersweet. I hope Draco will eventually forgive Hermione. And I wonder if he's going to say anything about her asking to be called Hermione, and her calling him Draco. He didn't seem like he noticed, but he's done that before...so, I'm not sure if it's in his subconscious this time or not. I don't mind both angst and a happy ending, but please, it has to be happy!!! I terribly dislike sad/tragic endings. It really gets me depressed...but I'm avidly awaiting the next chapter. The next chapter isn't the last is it?

I wanted to say a lot here but all I can manage at the moment is how amazed I am that you've created a moment in time that is so perfectly beautiful and yet so devastingly painful for them too. Can I just put you on pause now and have that moment forever too? I really don't want them to have that tomorrow. Hmmm, I'm off to find tissues. :( Wonderful, magical stuff, my dear.

OMG OMG OMG this was wonderfull very sweet this was a mesmorizing goodbye... Simply brilliant.. I can't wait on what is coming next, please do not make us wait to long.. :)