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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very unique. The first time i read it i got so engrossed in it so much that i was able to finis the chapters in one night! I couldnt believe that it was Hermione all along. You really are a very clever writer! I didnt foresee that this is will be the end of the long search.

I feel so sorry for Draco and i feel a little anger toward Granger. But love will find a way, right? I know Draco will come around. PLease update soon. the waiting is killing me....
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As harrowing as I expected, and as it should have been. I'm really looking forward to how you resolve things. Draco has his memories, but he's a wanted man. How does he move on from here? Hermione is in love with him, but how can she possibly reconcile that with her job and with, well, everything and everyone else in her life? And, of course, how you are going to resolve their relationship. I'm hoping that when he calms down and remembers that she told him she oblviated herself, he'll relent enough to hear her side of things. Which will still leave all the external issues for them to deal with. Good job. I can't wait for more.
person Rosamund
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. No other words can escape me right now.
person MegNutz
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! I hope you know that you had me crying while reading this chapter lol damn it! oh that was sooo worth the wait u don't even know lol can't wait until the next chapter and hope hope hope! it it soon. like I always so you are an amazing writer and that I just love this story!!! keep up the good work! <3
person mlui
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
His anger and rage is understandabe. I hope everything will turn out okay. Though, I was a bit surprised he didn't ask what's happening in the wizarding world now? I guess he was too upset to ask, but I hope he'll do so later. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was intense and the frase that you end this chapter was simply a stroke of brilliance.. MORE MORE MORE..... PLEASE
person Jaynie
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For something two years in the making, it was definitely worth the wait. I loved it!
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, here comes some good stuff, yes??!!

To me, I feel bad for Hermoine because he didn't even give her a chance to logically explain it, but obviously you didn't want him to do that, lol, thus why the story unfolded as it did.

I expect that now Draco is going to try and figure it all out, his money, the family home, etc. Perhaps finding out that he is a wanted man might help him to understand the choices that Hermoine did. Though I tend to see him in court and THEN learning what Hermoine did, the stupid git.

Congratulations on a well crafted story, I still love the bits about finding her memories and that she herself was the one to do what was done.

Bravo, I hope the next chappie isn't a month away, but much closer!
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow!! that was great!! loved it!
but there better be a happy ending once Draco has calmed down, and Hermione explains that she didnt know who did it to him until then!!
update soon!!
xoxox
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I thought you did a great job with this chapter. Hermione's heartache really came through. I could actually feel her pain - I even cried! Of course I expect angst once Draco finds out what Hermine did but I also am hoping for a happy ending! Also I hope you explain how Draco will not be sent to Azkaban. After all wasn't that mentioned earlier in the story? Anyway, can't wait for more.