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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing, just splendid dear! I love it ., it's so heartbreaking to see Draco like this. *begs for happy ending* so sad., I feel like hugging the poor dear., he's so sad snif..
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AGAIN...OMG!!! Hold on while **sniff** I get a couple tissues. OK, I think this was one of my favorite chapters. You really wrote Draco's reaction to Hermione's truth so perfectly. I'm excited to get the next chapter.
person kazfeist
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, about as expected. Don't make her grieve too long, eh? Maybe a little one to remember him by? :D
person SpinLily
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I found your story a month or so ago, and I have to say that it's wonderful! I love the memory charm plotline, and the romance between Draco and Hermione is both HOTT and very sweet. D/Hr is my ship and I've been reading fanfics about them for years, but I don't think I've ever felt as sympathetic toward them as I do in this story. Your story has been in my head so much that I have a song for it; every time I hear "Love Remains the Same" by Gavin Rossdale I think of your Draco and Hermione!

I can't wait to see what you have planned for this story, but I'll admit that I'm hoping for a happy-ish ending. I'm not one that believes a story has to end with roses and sunshine and babies, but I have my fingers crossed that they'll manage to work things out and at least wind up in a relationship. They've been through so much... they deserve a little happiness, right?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, It was beautiful...I almost cried
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just so heart-wrenching. I feel for Draco and all his lost memories and time, and Hermione for what she had to do. I really hope there is more to this story.
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I have nothing more to offer you than to say that was another truly brilliant chapter. The emotion, the anguish, the sorrow, all of it wrapped up in a tear jerking, heart wrenching bow. Kudos, my dear, kudos!!!!!!
person elladee
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heart-wrenching chapter! I really feel for them both. Although I know how I hope this will end (happily~♥!!), I'm totally clueless about how things will get there or what will happen now, for either of them. But I love your writing and know I'll be riveted by whatever you write next. ;D Looking forward to more of this story, as always~!
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I actually cried when I read this.

Please don't let this be the end for my fave non-real whip. :(
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's really intense moment! I never expected him to accept easily...poor Hermione! BTW, I still wanna see happy ending though it seems like it may not happen soon. LOL

Can't wait for next chap!