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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just starting reading this because it sounded like a sure bet for some grade A smut, and now I'm addicted and checking for updates more than I should. This idea is so creative, and you've worked so much deeper meaning into this fic that I could not have foreseen from the summary, that I was tearing up when Hermione revealed herself. I love your exploration of Draco Malfoy in such a strange and unlikely 'what-if' situation, and I'm dying to see how he'll handle choosing between identities. Favorite part: Draco's chant/prayer before each show. I love how you didn't let us know what he was saying at first, and then when we do find out, it's so poignant and revealing. Poor Draco. I LOVE LOVE LOVE your fic, and I'm hoping for more! -Bella
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been addicted to this story from the start. The wicked intentions, the tantalizing sex scenes and the well written and presented story. I commend you for taking us on this emotional journey of love, loss and fear. But now I must beg.... PLEASE GIVE US A HAPPY ENDING! I know you plan to end soon, and I'm sure you've already written your ending. I have written three stories that I plan to upload one day, when I am done, so I understand a writer's desire to end on their own terms. But I would be remiss if I didn't ask. They have both suffered so much, and have loved each other dearly. It actually hurts that they can't find a chance to heal and grow together.

See how good a writer you are, I am sad for fictional characters in a fictional scenerio to the point of begging a stranger to give them joy. ;-) Well done!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooow,. wonderful new chapter! i'm glad you updated again., I adore your story., You go girl!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, another incredible chapter.
I hope he goes back to Hermione.
maybe he will ask her to obliviate him again...
Poor Hermione, I feel bad for her.
Well, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
I Loved this chapter.
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The hits keep coming for both of them, don't they? Great chapter. Of course.
person MegNutz
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first all I wanted to say that was another GREAT chapter...even if the wait for it was a lil bit long lol. however it was worth the wait....but then again all of ur chapters are:D trust me it makes my day when I see a new chapter is up from u. can't wait for the next one and hope its soon!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story but then again i've porbably already said that in other reviews lol keep up the good work!!!
person Rosamund
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Magnifique! Magnifique! Okay, I spelled wrong but am too excited to care...awesome job. Draco needed that scene...needed to know. I hope he can pull himself together, and that HE is the one to approach Hermione again. I know, bad Avanell! What does everyone else think? Who should approach who first? Or would you rather an accidental meeting? I hope Draco gets things back in order, and Hermione to help him clear his name. Or whatever is best for Draco in this uni :)
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Poor Draco and Hermione. I'm really interested to see how you're going to resolve this story. I really hope it has a happy ending. I think those two deserve it and each other. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Robs
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter! Hermione is going to be hard to forgive, I get that, but he really should have let her explain. If he could see her now...or she him, for that matter. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this fic, please write the next chappie soon!