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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Alternate ending? Oh no, that sounds like they aren't going to be together?
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was BRILLIANT - wow, I could taste the tension, regret, love, anger, desperation....UGH! WONDERFUL. Draco is so lost and she's so connected to him. She wants to help him but doesn't know how, the truth is he needs to help himself. He needs to find himself. Can't wait for more and to see what you mean by alternate ending.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok 1st no tissue alerts, this was so heartbroken that I need almost a box of tissues... Could you please send me a note to my email ishtar2012@aol.com on this alternative ending for livejournal. Again this was simply amazing.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it's all up to Draco to figure out whether he loves Hermione enough to reach out to her or not. She's done what she can, afaict, so it will be interesting to see what he decides.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, fantastic chapter as always!!
so very raw and emotional!!
keep up the good work!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
xoxo
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! YOU UPDATED!

Well done; I'm so glad he wanted to hear her version of events.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting MONTHS for you to update this story. Literally. And, I never review stories, but I created an account on this website, even though I am not a writer, to tell you to UPDATE ALREADY! PLEASE. Or don't start stories that you aren't going to finish. It is INCREDIBLY aggrevating.

-Pixie
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and your story is brilliant, by the way. I'm not an author, so I don't have any particulars, but altogether, it is incredible so far. Please update soon. I'd hate to have to guess how this ends.

-Pixie
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story, I do hope you finish it.
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE up date soon, this is such a great story.