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for A Pound of Flesh

by PennilynNovus

person Riviera
schedule January 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for this amazing story! One of the Best Dramione stories ever! It was a great pleasure to read and I added it to my collection immediately) Wish you a lot of inspiration and time to write more new stories!

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schedule January 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was more than a fun read - it was a beautiful ride of joy, angst, and smut. Thank-you so much for sharing this story.

person Caro2011
schedule December 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was so original and fantastic! I read it in 2 days!

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Mudblood...she is so selfish. Draco is losing his mind and she still preferred not to confess because silly mudblood does not have anybody and she's afraid that she'll lose him. Of course, she keeps rationalizing that she loves him and wants to keep him. If you really live a person, you'll do anything to help him ease his burden..like fucking preventing him to go insane.
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's good to know that finally I have confirmed my hunch that fucking stupid mudblood was the one who obliviated Draco. If she was the epitome of goodness, she wouldn't have abandoned him in a strip bar...I mean your reasoning author was a load of SHIT! She obliviated herself but she did not even leave clues than jud a piece of note in a trunk. What if she never opened it because she was a scaredy cat?! Yup, geniuses can be stupid too.
person Danielle Rippy
schedule April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read sooooo good and I have read alot !!!!
person RhiannonULlewelyn
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well goddamn, this story just messes with my mind like nothing else!!! Awesome work!!!!
person RhiannonULlewelyn
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Friggin awesome story!!! One thing I find interesting is this story is almost aling the lines of Oedipus in its process. A twisted homage to that classic of finding justice &... the answers. Sexy but almost creepy.
person Trelweny
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic story! The details were superb and the characterizations were fabulously done. Luna was a bit more... Energetic than I normally envision her... but she was more background anyway so no big deal there.

I loved how the plot circled on itself. Really loved how Draco listed through his forgotten memories of himself alongside his new ones as Damien King to decide which traits he liked and wanted to keep. If only it were that easy... but still it's nice to see. Thrilled he retained his muggle best friend. That was exceptionally touching. How did he reenter the wizarding world though? Just pop back up "oh I'm not dead" and things work out? O_o I can comprehend how you'd want to skim over that though: this is a romantic fic and going too much into That would deviate too much from the pair in question most likely as well as probably causing a shift in your writing style for this piece. It worked... just with a lot of holes and questions which although I don't Need to have answered I can't help wondering.

WAS sorry not to see Neville anywhere, but can't be helped. ;)

Glad there was a happy ending after all. Seeing your author's note about alternate ending and epilogue I was worried the good ending would be somewhere I didn't go!

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've finished reading A Pound Of Flesh, and was never disappointed. The attention to (and impressive knowledge of!) canon secondary characters adds so much depth to a story! Lovely Granger (for once), very true to herself I think, and amazing Draco! So far from the fanon clich