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for Cupboard Space

by harriet

person Diana
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing! sex by chapter 11!!! wow.... thats a record for you, Its normaly there around chapter 35 or so. I think i liked this sweet little story, and wouln't mind more like it ^.^*
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Was really good and funny!
person Catina
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MUAHAHAHA YES YES!! Very VERY satisfying!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was very gratifying. *grins* I've missed your writing!
person kase
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy and fun!
person Lucy
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh yes,
This is a very good start.
Very very good.
I'm so intruiged!
I especially liked how Snape let loose a little bit of a softer side, while still remaining nice and snarky.
I thought Harry kicking Snape in the groin seemed very realistic as well.
He acts out a lot in the books, and most people make him too complacint in Fanfictions I think.
The killing himself part seemed a bit of a strech (he's gotten through a lot of tough/embarrassing situations in the stories), but I didn't think it was TOO bad.
He IS very dramatic, after all.
Anyway, Here's your review from me!
Get-to-Posting!
:)
person Flushed
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOoooooooooooooooooooh pleaase, the suite, please, and for the other too, please. That's so cool. Please !!!!
person Kara Williamson
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THis is a great story! I saw it this morning and started reading. It was getting close to time for me to go to class and I was terrified that I wouldn't be able to finish what was posted. I actually considered just sitting there for as long as it took to read it and showing up late for Spanish. Can't wait for another chapter!
person Cindy
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue with the rest of the story. I can't wait to find out how Harry and Severus get together.
person Diana
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg... can you say autoerotic asphyxiation? xD

Gimme more, or I might pull a stunt like that one ^.~*