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by Kireania

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MOOOOOOOORE! Please.
person bls
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! Love the end when Draco was riding him. I just love how sexy & confident Harry is in your story. Since this is a mate thing i'd have to guess that Draco is going to die if he is rejected.
You have guts if you can tell your boyfriend that you write yaoi stories. Although, I wonder how he's going to react reading chapter 4.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! how can you just leave it like that! Ack. Love the story though. I hope your going to explain the red eyes too. talk about extremely hawt though. And the wyhole fruit thing...mmm...any fruit can be sexy, as long as its not in extremely big, cept for strawberries covered in whipped cream but that it off topic now. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Kerstin
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a good one! ^.^ When I read the first chapter of your story I liked it very much. But it was so long till the next chapter was out. Then I forgot to look at it and when I finally did there were two new chapters. ^!^ That was so good. I really like it!
And I love Harry possessiv and jealous, do you think that I'm lucky enough to get some of this? ^.^Oh please, please, please.
Keep writing! ^_
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOOOARRE!

Translated: More! (Please)
person Nicki
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
person Extraho
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you evil thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Funny Bunny
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Nooooooo!!!! how could you just leave a cliffy like that!!!!! Blah.... good story....and is this like some kind of creature fic of something? cause that's what i'm getting from that whole... 'mate' thing...... anywho! update soon!!!! pwease!!!!
person Sue
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person RRW
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a completely hot story. What is Harry? I can't wait for Lucius to find out. OMG, OMG, OMG...I love this story...OMG, OMG, OMG! Simply fabulous.