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person Anon
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES!!! I LOVE YOU!!! More of this story, I cant wait...its like my freaking ADDICTION! Your are the most amazing person ever... I cant wait till the next one...Ill be watching :)
person Extraho
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what can i say? i fu*****loved it. cant wait for the sequel.
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh so sweet, now their officially married! LOL the amount of things they manage to do together and not even realise that their doing it is quite funny.... Can't wait til the next part!!!! :D
person Jan
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Their married? I can't believe it. This was a very exciting chapter, what a way to end it. I can't wait to see how Harry Potter and The White Queen turns out. ^__^
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm batting my arms trying to deal with all the happy feelings inside. It was so beautiful! Such a lovely ending! They are married!!! Honestly, just the THOUGHT of being married to Harry Potter or Draco Malfoy gives me shivers. They are both so lucky hahaha, I can't wait for the next part of the saga!! I'm so excited and I full of joy and bubbly feelings! lol I loved Harry's reaction to finding out they're married! Ahh I just love it all!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody awsome work, girls. freaking brilliant. dont ever stop writing 'cause you girls have talent. and lots of it, too. i wouldnt miss HP and the White Queen for the world. lots of luv, snarry-lover
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well fisrt off I wish to say how excited I was to stumble onto this series in the making, and it has so far been a pleasure. I will be the first to admit that reading the last three chapters was very exciting and also very scary. I an never good at reading the darker parts of a story and when I have gotten as ingrossed in a story as I did this one I find it hard not to feel overwhelming emotions while reading. My only complaint and it is nothing to major but it seemed that the conflict with Dracos' father came very late in the story, and it would might have been a little bit more interesting to have a more drawn out conflict with that matter. Dont get me wrong though the last few chapters had me scared to death for what might happen to Draco and Harry. Overall though im looking forward to reading the next installment, and wish to congradulate the creators of this story for a very well job done...

Roxas
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't log in to review, but I just had to after this marvellous chapters. You took us on quite a ride there. For a moment I thought it was all going to hell, but Draco saved the day :)
If Harry had transferred the bond to Lucius, or even just cancelled it, it would have been the worst thing he could do! Lucius never promised he would stop others (like Voldemort) from harming Harry, and he could have ordered Draco to tell him the secret of Grimmauld, since Draco promised to do everything he was able to do. Good that the bastard is dead.
I really hope that Lucius was wrong, and the bond can't be transferred or broken that easily, because who would prevent others from trying it? What if the deatheaters escape and try, or tell Voldi!
I read there are only two chapters left, which is - I hate to say it - quite alright with me, since I won't have internet access after this month. But despite this, I hope you write another sequel, I'm sure to read it when I'm online again in a few months!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*exhales* I honestly had to hold my breath for the first half of that O_O lol but I LOVE the way they killed Lucius and stupefied/bound McNair, Crabbe and Goyle. That scene was fantastic! It gave me shivers from the way they reacted in such perfect unison and everything *awe* it was just amazing! And I also love how Draco's the new Lord of the Manor hehehe that makes me squee! This chapter was awesome and SOOOO worth all the knots in my stomach from before lol I love it! Is there going to be a sequel to this story as well? I certainly hope so :)
person graballz
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42--*moans* Why do I have an ominous feeling that this is going to get worse before it gets better???? And I do believe this will be the last coherent sentence of my review, since I just clicked "next chapter"...let the screaming commence...

OH GOD HARRY!!!! He must be SO frustrated right now, not being able to talk!!!!!! I HATE YOU, YOU STUPID FUCK LUCIUS!!!! OH GOD !!!!! The conflict....."protective mode"......."survival mode".........MY BABIES!!!!!!! I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!!!! WHAT'S HARRY GOING TO DO???????

*GASP* YES HARRY YES!!!!!! GOOD BOY!!!! THAT'S WHY YOU'RE THE HERO NOT ME!!!!! OH MY GOD YOU CLEVER THING!!!! I COULD JUST KISS YOU RIGHT NOW, BUT I'LL LEAVE THAT TO DRACO FOR LATER!!!!!!!!

*sob* NO NO NO NO NO BAD BAD BAD OH DRACO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE???????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BABY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! FUCK YOU LUCIUS YOU DUMBFUCKINGBASTARDBITCHSCARYWHORECOCKSLITDICK ANIMAL!!!!!!!!!!!

yes HARRY YES YOU CAN BREAK THE CHARM AND THE BONDS AND KILL THE FUCK OUT OF LUCIUS!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HE DID IT OH SHIT OH FUCK YES YES YES YES YES YES I'M HYPERBENTILAIOGNASAIFNOAW EH8GPNV TWE0P I CAN'T FUCKING BREATHE!!!1 YES I'M GOING CRAZY BECAUSE I'M SO EXCITED YES YES YES YES YES

NO!!!! BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD FUCK FUCK FUCK FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!

YES HARRY THAT'S RIGHT!!! !KEEP HIS FOCUS ON YOU!!!! HE'S A HOTHEAD!!!! YES GOOD PLAN!!!!!

LUCIUS!!!!!!!! LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCIUS STOP THAT!!!!! YOU SICK FUCKIG BITCH!!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!! LEAVE MY DRACO ALONE!!!

OH MY GOD!!!! *shuddering, sobbing gasp* Draco......Draco honey!!! I'm so happy but I'm so worried!!!!!! MY BABIES!!!!!

YES YES YES YES GOOD GOOD GOOD FOCUS FOCUS!!!!!! *hope hope hope* OH SHIT!! BAD BAD BAD What's happening?????? I can't look!!!!!

OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK BAD BAD BAD BAD LUCIUS I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! I'm going to die!!! Seriously!!!!!

*screaming* OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HARRY! DRACO!