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schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need ch 19! Where did Draco go? Is he angry? Embarrassed? Aroused? Or all three?
person yume1122
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. good stuff.
i think if Fred & George had been there they would have been critiquing the whole episode like my friend & i do with porn. ^_^ F & G would've been sitting there like Seiskel & Ebert giving encouragment & commentary the whole time. lol.
& i've been waiting for Harry & Draco to have an actual argument or talk about their pasts. there's still so much Harry doesn't know about Draco's childhood....

it also occured to me recently that with his background Draco has a much better head for finances than Harry & he'd be appalled to hear about Harry just GIVING the twins the money for their store without writing out a contract for profit options, etc. but u've already got the whole thing written, so.... *shrug*
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Daha the best line was the ["Blegh" said Ron.] hahah I laughed so hard at that little conversation. I love your story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person yume1122
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!! O.O
that was a perversion i've NEVER seen in an HP fic. ....wow. *shivers*

uughh. lol.wow. *highly amused*
person cerichan
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you little tease!
Why did Draco behaved like that?
mmhh.....
person graballz
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What???? WHY WHY FOR THE LOVE OF MERLIN, WHY????? And HOLY SHIT...I don't know what I expected in the "aftermath"...fumbling, explanations, but I was totally NOT prepared for the second round of FUCKING HOT SEX!!!! And yet, after I read it, I was like, "Well, duh! Why didn't I think of that????"

And NOW......GAH I feel like I should know WHY Draco acted like that...but it's on the tip of my tongue and I just can't make it come to realization! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is wrong with Draco? Need chapter 18! Was it the "toy" comment that Draco himself made?
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nuuu you can't stop it there! AH why was Draco mad? I don't like it when they fight! Though I must say, the reactions they each had seemed quite realistic for a relationship if you ask me ^^ I hope you post again soon!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... after that AMAZINGLY HOT chapter, we get this one where Draco freaks out on Harry for no reason... Well, I'm sure there is a reason... So, please post the next chapter... :)
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch. 17 - pretty much my favourite chapter ever! Though I am very curious indeed. Can't wait for the update!