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Chapter 21--OMG This was so, so, so......perfect and it just "felt" right! And YES it was HOTT, but I LOVED how you just segwayed from the "plot" to the "sex" flawlessly. FLAWLESSLY!

I love this story! Please, more!

Chapter 20--HOLY FUCKING HELL! Just when I think it can't GET any hotter, you do it to me again! Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck but I fucking LOVE Harry's dirty talk! I FUCKING LOVE IT!

i love you guys.... and this story *muah*. its f***ing brilliant. cheers!

I love it when those Silencing Charms break. I laughed like Draco did, actually, trying not to wake up my whole building ^^ Mm cannot wait for more!!

Chapter 19--hahahaa thrnbrooke got it right!!! (Good guess, t!) and as for YOU, Slash Pervert, holy HELL Harry's dirty talk is SOOOOOOOOO FUCKING HOTTT!!!!!! (with three "t"'s!) and also my response of "Oh shit! Hot, hot sex scene and then you want us to be able to focus on the PLOT??? FUCK!" I had to put the computer down for a minute before I could concentrate on the actual storyline...seriously, Harry and Draco could probably sit and stare at each other, and it would be erotic (if you wrote it...cuz that's what happens when you write...everything turns erotic and sexxxy) I love it!

And I LOVED the interchange between Draco and Hermione! I totally agree that people's opinions should be heard and respected and are valid, even if they don't change anyone's minds in a debate. It's just too bad that it didn't seem like Draco could translate that into fighting with Harry, but such as real life...SO realistically written. I wanted to shake them and knock their heads together!

(And honestly, I was ready to slap Draco for the passive-aggressive "I'm not going to talk to you but I'm not going to TELL you that I'm not going to talk to you" bullshit. If someone wants to be mad, fine. But at least respect me enough to tell me that you don't want to talk about it RIGHT NOW so that I'm not getting angrier with you because I'm waiting for you to talk to me...arg...okay, sorry, done now!) lol

*smile* Soooo need chapter 21!!!

Need chapter 20! Everyone was right with what they said. Just no one listened to the other.

Okay Draco has even confused me. Why was he acting like that? Can't wait to see more.

Daw Draco! I think I have a serious obsession with him, but anyway. I wanted to snuggle them both in bed there but I felt sooo bad for Draco when Fred and George started making fun! Wonderfully written and great chapter!

Chapter 18--"The Boy Who Shagged"!!!!!! BRILLIANT BLOODY GENIUS!!!! I giggled SO hard at that!!!!! And YAY for Draco and Harry not being upset with each other anymore!!! And as for the reason Draco was upset...it totally makes sense now!!! And I tell you, my heart just twisted when he was explaining to Harry, and I was like, "That's EXACTLY what I want!!!"

But as uncomfortable as they all were about it...bloody fuck, IT WAS SO HOTT!

(Betas...life...what??? There IS no life; just Harry and Draco goodness on AFF! Silly betas...)