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schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It said you had 99 reviews, so I had to pop in here and take the hundredth. That last comment I left was for the 23rd chapter, btw.

Fourty four chapters, eh? Can't wait! ^____^
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 24! What a wonderful beginning for a birthday!
person graballz
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23--Oh, where to begin??? Alright, first, I'm glad Draco took a shower (cuz then he's clean for Harry to lick on) but with all of the chocolate and cream and fruit...he's gonna have to take another one!

*giggle* Harry drew a penis? Why does that not surprise me? And the whole "playing with your food" exchange is BRILLIANT!

And....a gentle orgasm?? Does such a thing really exist? It was interesting, and still HOTT as hell. And it was just something different, which was really cool.

In response to your note, so should we say "SP and company"? "SP and ss_hh"? ;) Anyway, yeah, you both are amazing writers! Obviously I/we can't tell a difference between the scenes and who is writing what, so.....I guess I should just say "kudos to the author" instead of trying to name names...lol But just so ss_hh knows, if I ever give a compliment to SP for a portion that you wrote, then know that I'm complimenting you.

This was a really cute chapter and really believable! I imagine that Harry and Draco are going to be able to steal a couple more moments away to shag throughout the day! YAY! Let's have more!
person Kimera
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm loving this story. Very creative and very, very HOT.

Quick question-- the most recent two chapters, the Brothers Black and Birthday Breakfast are labeled within the chapters as 23/42 and 24/42. Are they just labeled wrong, or did you miss chapter 22? I'm wondering because the transition seems a little odd between "Dragon in the Order" and "Brothers Black" and I don't want to miss anything of this story.

Just wondering, and keep up the excellent work.
person graballz
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22--I love how Draco can calm Harry right down!!! Ooooooh, suspenseful chapter! Bravo! I'm still hooked and wanting more!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAH! I love the way this is written, it's so BELIEVABLE! I can't stop reading, really. Plus all the info on Regulus and all makes me squee! I want to kill Mundungus too. Prat. Hahah ok I'll shut up now but awesome chapter!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 23! Too bad they just can't use accio to make sure it's not in the house.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 22! I see that constructed hand being a sore point with Draco and hope it doesn't cause problems for the two later.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait to see more.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mm so wonderful!! I don't even know what to say, hehe. Can't wait for more!