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schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOO! I want to KILL Snape! He should just up and DIE a horrible, GRUESOME death! NO ONE DOES THAT TO HARRY AND DRACO! *is fuming* I swear, in Harry's place I would have killed him without a second though, but I suppose perhaps it wouldn't have been the best idea in the world.... perhaps.... anyway I love this whole story and all the twists and turns and it's wonderful! I wanna hug Harry now. Really. Poor boy. *sniff*
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter. i can see hints of the aformentioned abuse/incest :(

i love how you brought Abe into the fic. id like to think that he as a bigger role to play in JK's books. rather mysterious character that man

im an absolute addict. cant wait for tomorrows post, cheers!
person Jan
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Severus is such an ass. I can't believe he told Harry that.... what am I saying of course I do, his a miserable bastard. Please update soon. I enjoy this story immensely. ^_^
person yume1122
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i keep having to remind myself that u haven't set Snape up as the designated alternate secret keeper in this story, like so many other fanfics do.

& eeewwwwwwwwwwww!!!! >.< i realized u were trying to hit ALL the kink bases, but........just eeeewwwwwwwww.
(don't get me wrong, i'm a huge sirius-remus fan! just......eck.)
& there's SOOOOO much sex in here! O.O i've had to skim through some to get back to the plot cause i was getting so sick of it! ^_~

i like that you're keeping tension on the point of danger that their relationship poses. i go back & forth between believing that Draco truly is on their side & harmless...to thinking he's being used by the Dark Lord & doesn't know it.....to thinking he was putting ALL of them on at first but is now starting to fall for the ruse himself.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28

....*tries to discreetly wipe the drool off the desk* I love you both. :3 *purring*
person Jan
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe that Harry and Draco both got off on reading something about their "Family". Oh but it was still a fun chapter to read. Please update soon. ^__^
person graballz
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28--YAY TWO IN ONE!!!!! MY BRAIN DOESN'T WORK ANYMORE! SOOOOO FUCKING HOTTT!!! (Alright, I admit...the whole Remus/Sirius thing kinda weirds me out, but that's JUST because I love Harry/Draco so much! I don't want to imagine any other 2 guys but them! lol My own weird thing)

Draco captured??? No, he won't be captured! Please tell me that's NOT a foreshadowing of what's to come!! NO, I won't allow it! ;)

schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That part with the journal was hot, haha! I love Sirius/Remus too so that just makes the whole thing that much better :D Can't wait for more!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Draco be alright? Need chapter 28!
person graballz
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27--AUGH! Sex before plot AGAIN! I don't know HOW those boys are even that lucid after sex! I sure as hell am not! haha That was FUCKING HOT! And I can SEE the scene in my mind! (Well, all of your kisses, sex scenes, etc) I CAN SEE THEM PLAYING OUT IN FRONT OF ME! (and I think that's why my brain inadvertently turns to mush when I see a new chapter updated! But that's okay...KEEP UPDATING!)

I love how they Apparate to their room a couple of times a day...and I know the last couple of sentences "If Draco didn't wake up, Harry didn't know what he would do" were probably meant to serve as warnings...but I ended this chapter with a huge smile on my face, and I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. THANK YOU!