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Hi Ruth,
in Chap 4, Severus scourgifies Hagrid because Hagrid couldn't do it himself. Hagrid is allowed a wand again after the Chamber of Secrets mystery is solved, I think.
in Chap 5, it's orchard, not orchid.
And yes, your story is awesome as always, but you already know that.
Cheers.

Thanks hon...I fixed those errors. Good looking out. :)

I guess chaps 7 & 8 were re-edited? The anti-rape benefits storyline is much clearer, and there seems to be more details in the interactions between the guys in the waiting room?

Hi non. No...the chapters were lifted directly from the other site when I realized I hadn't posted it here. I may have done some editing on that way back when, though.

OMFG...LOL! I just read the first chapter and I've never laughed so hard in my life.

Off to read more...

Good grief! You rolled in everything didn't you? Adam and Victor, LOL, they always bring a smile to my face, remind me of a a.m. DJ schtick that used to be on Friday mornings here, Bradley's Cosmetic Corner. Tonks and Snape sniping at each other. An amusement park? A Magic Carpet ride? A tango, and what a tango it was! Lusc... errr Lucius, Firenze, geez, I should have reviewed after every chapter I can't remember everything. Poor oblivious Ron. Marcus the telescope, what a smarmy boy ... Cassandra should take care of him nicely. Harry and Lusc ... dang, did it it again, Lucius, hooo boy. You rock girl, you rock. Pitt

OMG I thank you from the bottom of my heart that you didn't make Hermione have to endure sex with either Flitwick or Filtch. That would just so wrong. *grins* But Firenze I wouldn't mind. Hmmmm...that tongue!

OMG...I LOVE SUBMISSIVE HERMIONE! Awesome fic so far. I'm wondering if harry actually goes for a bit of fun with Lucius! *grins*

good story. i am enjoying it so far. i timed it perfectly so i started reading right when you uploaded it. when i started you had 3 chapters. when i finished reading you had 15. not sure how many more but i definately like what i have read so far.