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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn woman! I've been smirking and laughing all the way through this story, then you end it with such fluff I'm melting. *shakes head* I don't know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it.
Very original plot (for a PWP, hehe) tons of starting smut and lots of character development, with great diologue and interaction. This turned out to be so much more than a smex filled ride around the block, it was more like a road trip from coast to coast! I love a good, long story. 'Tis much more satisfying than short little oneshots. Thanks for providing such tittlating diversion from the hum-drum bores of everyday life. Go you!
Very original plot (for a PWP, hehe) tons of starting smut and lots of character development, with great diologue and interaction. This turned out to be so much more than a smex filled ride around the block, it was more like a road trip from coast to coast! I love a good, long story. 'Tis much more satisfying than short little oneshots. Thanks for providing such tittlating diversion from the hum-drum bores of everyday life. Go you!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I thought it was fantastic! Sanpe was just so seductive and sexy, I just wanted to jump on him the entire story! You did a really great job with this! Keep up the great work!!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bonza87: Thank you for the supportive review. About Marcus' ancestor, it wasn't so much that she was adventurous, but because she was a sacrifical "village virgin" lol. Who was also a healer. The dragon was injured and she healed him. Now, it wouldn't have been sporting to eat her after that, would it? As far as how they got together is a matter of conjecture, but I think Marcus got his telescoping abilities honestly. lol. Actually you can read about that ancestor in a story called "The Ghost and Lady Snape." Thanks again for your support. ***
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Ms Figg, unfortunatey I fell asleep last night before I had the chance to finish reading your brilliant fic, and then I had to shoot off to work (a pain, but entirely nessecary.) so basically, I had to wait all day to finish what I started, and I do hate waiting :P
However, I'm glad I did. This is a brilliant fic that certainly doesn't have the correct amount of reviews for the effort involved in writing it. come on people, where's you compassion for a fellow writer?!
Anyway, enough mindless babble, onto my review.
The cause of this whole, wonderful journey was a very clever idea, Hermione Granger, Spells Mistress, falling on her own sword (and those of a few others lol.), so to speak. In my opinion it's one of the more well thought out plot devices, rather than the usual standard of blackmail that seems to abound in fic writing.
I was impressed that you deviated from the obvious of having Harry and Ron jumping in while they had the chance, and quite liked the way you did it too.
A part dragon as well? my my, one of his ancestors was an adventurous type weren't they? lol. Good job on keeping Hagrid and Firenze helping out without actually going the distance. I was happy when you made Hagrid appear ashamed at having succumb to his body, after all, he's watched Hermione grow up, and it wouldn't have been right.
I absolutely loved your gay vampires! I have a friend who is just like the hairdresser in your story (sorry, forgot the name.) it was almost uncanny :)
Severus cut a very dashing figure in this story, and I loved it. Very suave. Plus the dancing and duelling scenes were excellent.
Hermione was delectable, I can't find any other words to express how much I liked her character in this.
Anyway my dear, I think I may leave my review there for now. Thankyou for a wonderful read, and best wishes for any future fiction endevours.
Regards,
Bonza87
However, I'm glad I did. This is a brilliant fic that certainly doesn't have the correct amount of reviews for the effort involved in writing it. come on people, where's you compassion for a fellow writer?!
Anyway, enough mindless babble, onto my review.
The cause of this whole, wonderful journey was a very clever idea, Hermione Granger, Spells Mistress, falling on her own sword (and those of a few others lol.), so to speak. In my opinion it's one of the more well thought out plot devices, rather than the usual standard of blackmail that seems to abound in fic writing.
I was impressed that you deviated from the obvious of having Harry and Ron jumping in while they had the chance, and quite liked the way you did it too.
A part dragon as well? my my, one of his ancestors was an adventurous type weren't they? lol. Good job on keeping Hagrid and Firenze helping out without actually going the distance. I was happy when you made Hagrid appear ashamed at having succumb to his body, after all, he's watched Hermione grow up, and it wouldn't have been right.
I absolutely loved your gay vampires! I have a friend who is just like the hairdresser in your story (sorry, forgot the name.) it was almost uncanny :)
Severus cut a very dashing figure in this story, and I loved it. Very suave. Plus the dancing and duelling scenes were excellent.
Hermione was delectable, I can't find any other words to express how much I liked her character in this.
Anyway my dear, I think I may leave my review there for now. Thankyou for a wonderful read, and best wishes for any future fiction endevours.
Regards,
Bonza87
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg, I was trying my very best to wait until the end of this fic to review, as I prefer to leave an in-depth comment. However your Tango scene was just too much! You have to be a dancer, I've never read such a true account of the passion felt during that particular dance. I only wish I could lead as well as Severus seemed to, but I try :)
Incredible work, I adore your writing style, and casting Severus as a man who likes the chase was a fantastic move on your part. He's so suave, nothing like the greasy potions master from J.K Rowling's works!
I will most certainly continue reading until the end. When I first began reading I assumed it would continue in the same lemony vein as the first few chapters, I stand pleasantly corrected.
Maybe you could revise your author's note in the first chapter so that those looking for a more serious read know they can find one :)
I'm sure the rest of this fic will be an absolute pleasure
Regards,
Bonza87
Incredible work, I adore your writing style, and casting Severus as a man who likes the chase was a fantastic move on your part. He's so suave, nothing like the greasy potions master from J.K Rowling's works!
I will most certainly continue reading until the end. When I first began reading I assumed it would continue in the same lemony vein as the first few chapters, I stand pleasantly corrected.
Maybe you could revise your author's note in the first chapter so that those looking for a more serious read know they can find one :)
I'm sure the rest of this fic will be an absolute pleasure
Regards,
Bonza87
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@31. OMG awesome story I love it!! its amazing. Is there going to be a sequel?? I hope so. Keep writing!!! I love all your stories!!!!
*DB*
*DB*
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story.......now i need to find my boyfriend......
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible. I couldn't stop reading and I should have been in bed a couple of hours ago. Well done! I'm not usually a fan of HG/SS but this was really really good!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it; I would like to see Harry and Lucius' story unfold now. LOL! 10/10