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for Elemental Love

by naginisnake

person misslala
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a nice concept, I mean at least I think so. As far being a poor writer, I don't think you are poor you just haven't developed enough not to rush certain aspects of the story. I am guilty of that, LOL I think its' good so far and I look forward to more. Ignore flamers...some people are just rude.
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh man ... what is she going to do now ... pleasex30 update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow thanks for all the new reviews i'm glad you like it
person JaynaM
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't reviewed i have been on holiday, anyway. Keep up the good work, cant wait for more!

Jayna
xxx
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heheheh ..im glad mione got the boys to come around ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome keep going.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far, I hope you update again soon! ~DarkSeductress
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~smiles~ that was great i love it and will she make the boys and others wait in till she tells them ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Heksy
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...come off it, NaginiSnake, you are a wonderful writer and you know it.
This chapter was a very beautiful one.
Maybe you can elaborate a bit more on the bonding,
but the rest is perfectly fine.
I liked the way Dumbledore handled Ron and Harry.
Looking forwards to the next chapter.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey everyone just checking in. Thanks for reviewing