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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! It's just too cute! It is the first story I've read after a really tiring exam session and it really made my day.
The action develops really quickly and fluently, without producing holes in the plot. The characters are only reasonably changed, though I think Severus assuming that people will just notice the rings and act accordingly is a bit of a stretch. As a spy he should rather assume people to NOT notice things about him. It
The action develops really quickly and fluently, without producing holes in the plot. The characters are only reasonably changed, though I think Severus assuming that people will just notice the rings and act accordingly is a bit of a stretch. As a spy he should rather assume people to NOT notice things about him. It
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I FREAKIN LOVE YOUR STORY!!
Not many stories give enough detail and suspense but Oh My God! You sure as hell did!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hope it's up soon!! :)
Not many stories give enough detail and suspense but Oh My God! You sure as hell did!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hope it's up soon!! :)
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice love the twins even if I hate the way they were created and the sweetness of the relationship between harry and snape is perfect as well as the fact that they still insist on insulting each other.