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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person winterwater
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read your "It had to be you" fic....and I absolutely loved it, just like with this fic! OMG please update soon! I can't wait...what did they see???
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on, now! Who's the figure? Is it Draco? What did the snails write? TELL MEEEEEEE....
Oh, yeah. Good story and all that. I'm impressed with the level of research you've gone into with this one.
Update soon! I'm hooked!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh - much love ready to be given for this fic ^_^ haha, the ever-so-slightly ooc hermione is ok because she's otherwise reacting exactly like canon hermione would. Oh, and actual knowledge of the Beltane doesn't hurt either - big kudos for that!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!
person nonentity
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it! very nice characterization of Hermione and Ginny.
person miko
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmm........ very mysterious, very different. looks very interesting.
person Mac
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another one of your stories is always welcome .. I love them. BUT you better finish "It Had To Be You" please please finish. I'm dying here.

Mac
person Liz
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories! Great beginning to this one
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic. Well-written and very intriguing. So was it the man in question who was spying on them? Ooooh I hope you update quickly! ^.^Cat
person Audree
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written, must commend you.
as far as the plot goes: STOP AND I MIGHT DIE
=]
person TMaria
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!

very original and i cant wait to read more!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!! xxx