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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person MissingAngel
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo... this fic is brilliant. I'm totally fascinated by it and looking forward to the next update. ^_^ Have I mentioned it's brilliant?
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yum! I read your first chappie and meant to review, but you know how it goes. :)
This is an awesome story and very unique--keep up the good work!!

person slytherinprincess113
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are wicked!! I love it. You have a bloody fantastic gift. Can't wait for the next chappie.
person Liz(tink)
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I likies.... good intro and flirting.... nice
person Nosfiss
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally delicious! I like the plot and specially how you added those wicca things in the begining. Lovely all in all, please update soon!
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gods, i like it very much. you're a so great writer! i'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
love, vic
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh goody, you updated!!!
Keep it coming! No flashbacks or filler, mind. Just good, straight, forward-ever onward. Action action action!!!
Love how you paint the pictures of what's going on. Your voice is distinct and vibrant. I am also very pleased with how you tied your lovers into the same circle, so they could see what is right in front of them. And, boy, isn't Hermione just stubborn and... English enough to deny the butterflies! You can't escape... the butterflies! Silly girl. Draco is just too scrupmcious, too like the forbidden fruit himself.
I look forward to your next installment.

-Gwyn
person AMAZED
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for a new chapter. Hoping hoping hoping that the rest of the story can match up to the beginning. plz email notice of a new chapter!
person jes
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm intrigued!!! i can't wait for the next installment! i've read your other fic i believe, It Had To Be You, and i enjoyed that as well, so i'm sure this one will be just as fun! happy writing! :)
person -B-
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a very interesting start