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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person Monkey Lady
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've started here. It's sad that the school was damaged and it makes me worry that valuable characters are gone, but I like the plot in general. I adore Hermione and Draco, so I'm really looking forward to seeing how this turns out. :)
person Sessh's Sango
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!
person Leli
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm hooked. I can't wait for more!! In the mean time, I'll check out your other fics.
person ~ Monique ~
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You, Lorett, are one amazing writer, you know that?

It was sexy, funny, witty, descriptive, and just plain _awesome_. The flirting was adorable/sexy, and the teasing set up the perfect mood for "let me cook you dinner" to come into play. The "Adam"/"Eve" + "Malfoy"/"Granger" was very cool [fabulous consistency]. "I am a well read man" + "I only indulge in the very best" = Smexy. Thank you for painting that gray-eyed, deep-voiced picture for me. *le sigh*

I think I'm going to just go read it one more time...*^.^*

["...Ah yes, so you can catch the bigger fish to fly.
person skydancer
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, my.. that was hot enough to bake a pie!!!! wonderfully written, and very visual.

I'll be back in time for dinner!

Sky
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Lauren
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far, please continue writing this. Keep up the great work
person Mac
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another update ... and more sexy Draco *sigh* I really like this story.

Update soon.

P.s .. when are you gonna finish "It Had To Be You"??? i'm dying to see how it all ends.
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good storyline, well written, and a discernible plotline. All in all, we have a winner. Keep up the excellent work, and please update soon.
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh dinner for Malfoy? I love it already! I hope you update quickly! ^.^Cat