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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person Mika
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo! Nice! I believe I read the first chapter of this story awhile ago and that was it for a long while. It's nice that you added some more chapters, some more EXCELLENT chapters might I add! Can't wait to read some more!
person Sushi
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this fic!!! please please please write more! you rock my socks! ^_~
person Jen
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope you consider updating this. It's positively marvelous! If you have anyway to let people know when you update, please add me to that list!! I adore the sweet and darling Hermione and Draco in this story, and would love to read more.
person transmogify
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your Draco, makes me smile.

Please, please, continue this fic. I am looking forward to reading more.
person Abby
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story so much please keep writing
person maddy
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A finer, juicier tasting story I've not seen in a while. Very much looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the sweet, sweet work. Madaline
person B
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore it!! Especially the way you describe the chemistry between Draco and Mione... Yum!! Hope u update soon,it's most definitely a story worth reading... <3 B
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this chapter...the flirting is almost too much and the sexyness is just oozing between the lines...waves herself cool again.
Malfoy is just a total gentlemen, but with a really sexy underline that I like very much. Oh how I would love to read your next chapter and find out what will happen when they have dinner. Please don't let us wait to long!!
Great job!!!

DJ
person AMAZED
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dancing around* You updated so soon! Hope you'll email again when you update, i like where this story's going
person tenoh27
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous! Please write more. Thank you.