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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person Shelly
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read ff for over 5 years now and have only reviewed one other author. To say that your writing style is fantastic is an understatement. This is the first story I have read by you, but it will not be the last. I have really enjoyed what I have read so far, so please keep up the good work.

Shelly
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can I just say I love this story? You do an incredibly good job with Draco's character. Keep up the great work!
person angelpiphi
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous fic!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

*hugs*
person Jen
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now THAT'S what I call a dinner date! ^_^ The whole thing, from him arriving early to a be-robe'd Hermione, the apple pie, the witty banter, and even the kitty. How marvelous! And the silky nightgown was just icing on the cake! ^_^ I cannot WAIT to see what Adam has cooked up for Eve in the way of a costume. (I <3 the pet names they have for each other since the fall of the apple! ^_^) Lots of love! Jen
person Bree
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just got to reading this story... I rather enjoy it =) I'm hoping I'm on the right page in assuming that the lady Draco was referring to about the afternoon shopping date in the 3rd chapter was Hermione... The only thing... Did Hermione finally catch on to that?
person Mandy
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great story,I cant wait for you to update!
person Nosferatu
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, this is my current favorite fic! I just love the bantering/flirting between Hermione and Draco, you made it just so true... And in the beginning with all the wicca(I presume they were wicca) traditions, it fits the story to the dot. This is a marvelous story, hugs to you and whatever you do do not give up on this!!!
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is OMG!!!!!!! i use to hate draco but after reading this story well lets just say that i wish i was hermione right now! wow ur a fantastic writer i plan to read every single stroy u write wow! wow! wow! thats all i can say about this story and for the love of god update soon!!!!
sincerly
Inowluvdraco
person mina
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WEll DONE!!!! I can see the detail you put in to this chapter and it is nothing short of stunning!!! it was worth the wait! Thank you for updating!
person Angel
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAHHHHHHHHH!!!! I hate yooouuuuu! How can you stop it there! You torture us missy!

Draco. Hermione. Eve. Adam. THIS. STORY. ROCKS! GAAAHHHH

That aside.

I love your writing too. It all flows and makes sense. And I LOVE how you interpreted the future, like with the war. I imagined a similar outcome (with Draco and Snape, and Dumbledore) but I never would have thought Harry would die. But anyway, I like it. It's rare to find this sort of fiction that completely works. Nice job!

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