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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can I say this story is very well written? I love it so far! Great job with bringing the characters alive :] Can't wait for the next installment!
person jes
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i almost forgot about this story b/c you havent updated in a while. im so glad i stumbled upon it again. loving it! i absolutely adore the way they banter and flirt back and forth, it's so cute. can't wait for the next chapter!!!! happy writing! :)
person demoneyeskyo
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow,just wow. this story is so wonderfully detailed. it's so interesting, it has got me hooked! going on to the next chapter! wonderful job!
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing.
person Kilalla
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is so super cute!!!! I really like it, plus i love how hermione didnt get that the hint for teh lunch date until draco explaine dit to her, i just think that is totally her.
good job!
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. I always adore a demanding and bossy Draco. Great job.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love the sexual tension between the two and how you are slowly building it up! Great job.
person morwen re
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... this fic rocks! i've been looking for some decent hermione/draco fics, and sadly i haven't found very many i like. you actually use correct grammar! yay!
person eggella
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this fantstic story. happy writting;)
person Soraya
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, love your writing style. keep up the great work!! hope to see an update soon!