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for A Forbidden Fruit

by lorettcopeland

person Untamed HJP
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written story, Miss, I found it quite informitive. Gives me something to keep in mind, you know since poor Harry is dead and all... You weave a very believable tale. And I have enjoyed it.
person margaritama
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story - so sexy and sweet...
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this! It is to good to let languish forgotten and lost on a computer. I love the other stories you have posted so please update them I beg you!
person nera
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please,please,please,please, finish your story...it's so unique and well written and grown up. I love every detail you've put in it...and i'm begging you to update. I know it's hard to write after a delay, but I have to read the next chapter. Please? I'd like to get a response to my review....and since I'm listed among the authors,(as zara) you can leave it as a review to 'tainted white'.
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smatizio
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. That was just wonderful. Please tell me you're continuing with this story I can only imagine what's to come...Sarah
person jan
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter, hope it comes soon.

The witty dialogue, humor and (hot) sexual tension are a lot of fun. I'm blushing at some of Malfoy's comments!
person kazfeist
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah! You've updated at last! Now, on to the Gala...can't wait to see the costume! :D
person SlytherinsWench
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what I like best about your writing? It's that you take the darkest subject and find the light. Your muse speaks in a concise language that is for everyone. You can include all those dark topics, it's not just glossed over, but I suppose it's that you find the hope. That is a constant thread in all of your pieces. And as I said before, I like how you included the Samhain rituals and made them something beautiful and spiritual, while fun and innocent. Great job, doll.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness, I am in love with this fic, as well as both of your other. I love your writing style, and how well you've established your characters. This is just great, great great. Please keep writing, I'm looking forward to the update!