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for Christmas Surprise

by DarkHufflepuff

schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...wow.... could it be..? naw, how about....no,never mind.....maybe..nope....ohohohoh!!!! I know!!!!.....*ahhhh!!!* *gurgle*....*snap*.

very edge of seat, had to force myself to slow down while reading!!!
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely felt the tension and stress that the characters were feeling. Great start!