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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Noooooo! Please update soon:)

I'm *so* enjoying this and can't wait for the next installment. I don't usually read dark fic/drabbles unless in the right kind of mood. Now I'm in the mood :}

I enjoyed your work and look forward to reading something else by you.

I keep wondering who "he" is. I had a theory, but then your death list killed that theory because he was one of the dead. Now, I have another idea, which seems plausible, but I'm really curious if I'm right. I won't say here in reviews because I don't want to give any ideas away. I hope that you continue this one.

Your story is quite interesting. However, some gaping questions are in here who is doing the attacks and why. How did this start, is there a method to finding his victims? These question will probably be answered in the next chapter or two. Is this your first story? Feel free to contact me I am working on my first story as well it is very hard work, so feel free to comeiorate (sp?) with me if you want. I hope to see updates soon. This is quite a good start. Just fill up some plot holes and you are good to go! Cheers on your story. I will review as I see updates.

Oh my! Excellent beginning.....Who is this Mysterious new Dark Lord who is torturing them? Please Tell me Severus and Hermione will be alright!!! Can't wait for more!!! Hurry soon please!!!! Well done!

Great start!! I'd like to see some more, very dark but there's nothing wrong with that, keep up the good work !

Is an interesting story. However, felt very choppy and all over the place. I did like what was written, I would just like to see more transition. I look forward to the next chapter.