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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am utterly speechless. I think this is the only poem I have ever liked that was written by a fanfiction writer. I really liked how you cut off the words, and the jumbled random thoughts while Draco was cutting himself. I adore this. Lovely job!
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oye, that was deep. o.o
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--how's this for irony? Your first fanfic...the last one I read by you. And judging by the other reviews (yeah, I cheated for this one haha) I better get the Kleenex out again!
*whimper* THEY WERE RIGHT!!!! NO DRACO NO! BABY!!!! Awwww, this one is probably the most angsty one of your section!! (Purely because he tries to commit suicide...and I say "tries" because someone comes in and stops him, then tells Harry, and Harry takes him in his arms and tells him he loves him and they live happily ever after!)
haha I'm such a dork, but there we go! Wow Wow Wow!
I have a couple of questions, though, and if I'm reading too deeply into it, just let me know.
1. How old is Draco when he's pressing the blade to his wrist? Did you have a particular age for him in mind? I mean, I can see the progression of him being 11 (being refused Harry's hand) and then as they're growing up (masturbating)
But when does the change come about? (according to you) I haven't read the books or seen the movies, so I can think of only a couple of possible "turning points" and I was wondering whether you were thinking he was 14-15...or 16-17...just curious.
Wait, wait. "The change in me"...that occured before the bathroom scene...so was that when Draco was commanded to kill Dumbledore? And he realized that he didn't want to?
Okay, okay, sorry, I'm done musing...sorry for rambling on your review page!
*whimper* THEY WERE RIGHT!!!! NO DRACO NO! BABY!!!! Awwww, this one is probably the most angsty one of your section!! (Purely because he tries to commit suicide...and I say "tries" because someone comes in and stops him, then tells Harry, and Harry takes him in his arms and tells him he loves him and they live happily ever after!)
haha I'm such a dork, but there we go! Wow Wow Wow!
I have a couple of questions, though, and if I'm reading too deeply into it, just let me know.
1. How old is Draco when he's pressing the blade to his wrist? Did you have a particular age for him in mind? I mean, I can see the progression of him being 11 (being refused Harry's hand) and then as they're growing up (masturbating)
But when does the change come about? (according to you) I haven't read the books or seen the movies, so I can think of only a couple of possible "turning points" and I was wondering whether you were thinking he was 14-15...or 16-17...just curious.
Wait, wait. "The change in me"...that occured before the bathroom scene...so was that when Draco was commanded to kill Dumbledore? And he realized that he didn't want to?
Okay, okay, sorry, I'm done musing...sorry for rambling on your review page!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This would make a great addition to a Obescion fic.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's sad so very sad but I LOVE IT!!!! Here is a big hug for writing. I mean you've just managed to sum up a lot of feelings in such few words its great.
I really do enjoy fics like this whether sad or happy I just love how different they are.
Ja ne
Kireania
I really do enjoy fics like this whether sad or happy I just love how different they are.
Ja ne
Kireania
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great!!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No!!! Don't let it end like this!! Oh Draco!